Divertente!

I really wish you were still around to work on more chapters and stories you have. I really enjoy what you have going so far.

I also really hope that during this time we are in that things aren’t going to bad for you. I hope your able to stay healthy and that those close to you are able to as well.

Finally a fic where Naruto and Hinata training together with Jiraiya! Would be interesting if you tell the three years time skip 'bout Hinata development to teens!
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Plz keep going

Great story! I have to say, even when I didn’t agreewith certain plot points that happened in the story, I really enjoyed the way you told it! There’s just something in your narrative style and the dialogue of the characters that really reminds me of the actual way they speak and act in the anime.

So umm, to be honest I kind of feel like your story jumped the shark a tad when Sasuke attacked & got killed, after that things seemed to go a bit haywire and “omg! We need to wrap this up!” but having said that it was still very well done and fantastic that you saw the story through to a conclusion, there are just so many stories out there with really strong beginnings that seem to get abandoned, it’s just sad, so you should be really really proud that this isn’t one if them!

At the end of the day I kind of want to say poor Kiba, he didn’t do anything to deserve all this upheaval in his life, but I guess now that Sakura is hopping aboard Sasuke’s revenge bandwagon he can just join Choji & Ino’s genin team now. I never really loved Sakura, but all of the Sakura- bashing really took me aback a bit, especially when all of a sudden she and others were assessing how tragic her life had become now that she would never have the chance to “get with” any other guys from the Konoha 12..? That was weird.

In any case, I really enjoyed your story all in all, And I really hope you did write a Shippuden follow-up, it would be really interesting to see where you took the story after this and see how far it diverges from canon with all the changes you’ve made already! :)

Little bit late to the party, but none the less: Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. Only one minor nitpick: Tsunade rages about a team not needing two trackers and then puts Kiba and Hinata back on the same team a minute later. Would have been interesting to see the dynamic with Ino or Choji instead on the team. No need for the forced lovetriangle team no 2.

Man. If Sakura is gonna act like a little bitch someone needs to slap the darkness out of her. And I think that should be hinata

NaruHina fluff is great, as always.

...wow, Sakura's psycho.

I'm not even sure I can call that OOC, since she was pretty awful towards her 'friends' in canon at various points. She could really go either way - becoming more mature or throwing a tantrum and traveling a darker road. Since Sasuke's dead, it's not all that surprising she went psycho. This is the girl who MARRIED him after he killed her in a genjutsu and was perfectly content with a loveless marriage in which she was never even KISSED, after all.

Nice fic.

Makes sense Gaara would do the job. He doesn't have the same emotional attachment and understands that, barring a miracle, some people are just going to kill and kill and kill until they're put down.

Heck, Sasuke was actually further gone than Gaara. The sand jinchuuriki was basically lashing out like a dog trained for pit fighting because everyone treated him like trash and the one person who claimed to love him tried to assassinate him, then told Gaara as he was dying that he'd always loathed him. On top of all that, he had a demon whispering into his mind and keeping him from ever entering deep sleep (or much sleep at all). Little wonder he snapped. The moment someone made a human connection with him, he began to "rehumanize himself", as the lyrics go.

Meanwhile, Sasuke had human connections, was well-treated, and still went murderous. I'm surprised Gaara didn't privately hate him for that - it speaks well to the kid's character once he finally got an ounce of good treatment. People talk about Naruto having every right to resent Sasuke, but Gaara had it even worse - Sasuke got forgiven despite actively defecting from Konoha and working against its interests, but Gaara was objectively the shinobi wonderboy, even making it through an S-Class mission without a scratch, and got loathed for it. As such, he's got to understand Sasuke is an irretrievable mad dog and put him down with pity, but not remorse.

Sorry to ramble, but I'm just impressed at how much sense it makes to have Gaara end Sasuke's life.

Oh, thank heavens, Sakura has gotten over Sasuke. Thank heavens.

Hinata being too kind to hurt her younger sister makes a lot of sense. She really is too decent for the ninja world.

Naruto's also a good kid.

It's pleasant to see Tsunade laying down the law. Sasuke got way too much leeway in canon, considering the standards of the villages. Missing-nin literally have an entire class of ninja dedicated to hunting them down, dissecting them, and thoroughly disposing of the remains. I think Naruto's a bit naive about how the 'retrieval' mission would have ended, had he been successful... which almost justifies Sasuke's behavior on that mission, come to think of it. Once you leave a ninja village, there's no going back.

Please put out the sequel!

Cool great job

can you warn me if the sequel is updating.
i'm wont missed it.

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Betrayal by one who comes from a FAMILY of betrayers, hmm WHO WOULD HAVE THOUGHT OF THAT? WASTE OF TIME thinking about that moron! I'd send a silent prayer that he dies alone in a ditch and then never think of him again! As far as "bringing him back"? You can't bring back someone who never existed in the first place! They want their friend... He was never ANYONE'S friend, he TOLERATED them, because it could benefit him. What they are wanting back, is a figment of their own immature imaginations.

Kinda like the third believing he's ruling over "nice, kind, good people", or that orchimaru "isn't really a bad guy, or there is goodness in him" ALL LIES! Delusions so the third could SLEEP AT NIGHT and not go on a killing spree! Same thing here, naruto and the others have been so indoctrinated in LIES that they tell them to themselves already! Negji, sasuke, orochi, itachi, kakashi they aren't REALLY geniuses they just all refuse to believe the GARBAGE shoveled at them from the village, so they all SEEM smarter.(of course many: sasuke, itachi, negji and kakashi believe their OWN BRAND of HOGWASH! But that's beside the point).

A lot of their missions failed because the hokage kept trying to put kiba and naruto on the same team, they are both too animalistic to work together, it just can't happen. (it's not that they don't get along like sasuke... It's just a simple 'it can't happen because of NATURE!' -Like mixing dogs and wolves-*speaking from experience that can get UGLY until a "pecking order" is sorted*) it's the ONE reason their missions fail looking at the episodes, because naruto and kiba are ALWAYS getting into "pissing matches"... I'm not sure WHY kishi kept having it happen, maybe it's supposed to be funny in japan or something, I found it tiresome and ANNOYING.

"wondering what in the world she meant"?.. Um you had her be FAIRLY SPECIFIC in her words, I am not sure there is more then one interpretation that can be given NO MATTER HOW STUPID YOU ARE! (she kinda left NO ROOM for wondering, even for a dullard like him, as to WHY she would might throw him but that was ALSO fairly well addressed in her little speech). If you want this to be a flirt back and forth (which I see no reason for, they've had ENOUGH of doing that for YEARS) then you gotta NOT say some things. Personally I think all of their classmates hiding it from naruto shows how EVIL, CRUEL and malicious they can ALL be, even as kids! It's NOT "cute", it's MEAN! Sarutobi was really raising a generation of WINNERS there *rolls eyes*. (with how much was hidden, how many lies were told and how the kids acted, even IF the akutski had NOT showed up, I'd put even money down that a world war WOULD have still broken out in their generation, war of "the blind, idiot monkeys".. because it would be all his fault!.. and all over some eyeballs!)

The other thing that cracks me up with the series, is "hunter nin" are KNOWN for what they do and why they do it correct? (haku's appearance at first, kakashi explains it AGAIN, they learned it in the academy)... Well if that is the case, why did nobody MAKE SURE obito was ACTUALLY dead? Why was the body never taken care of? Why didn't anyone notice all these uchiha corpses were missing EYEBALLS after the massacre?(which would then point AGAIN as proof positive who took them!), why did naruto not BURN haku and zabuzza's bodies? That's what is SUPPOSED TO BE DONE.. (given the flame or being slowly devoured by bugs?.. I pick the flame).. Why did naruto not burn pein's? See? So much could be avoided with just a LITTLE, TINY bit of forethought! (although I still wonder why naruto just didn't TAKE the rinnegan for himself, uzumaki to uzumaki, it was HIS!)

Great story. Definitely different. I seriously look forward to the continuation of this story! Hope you start it soon I look forward reading it