Reviews for Severed Ties
Nutellagirl chapter 33 . 8/13/2019
Hi! I really love this fanfiction! I hope that u will upload it.
Guest chapter 33 . 8/18/2015
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY
Neko-Tenchi chapter 6 . 10/1/2014
do they only get one power? he's got swords dance and shes got detect, does that make him a fighting type and her a phychic type?
lily chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Love your story pleaseeeeeeee finish it! And I really hope dawn doesn't die (happy ending please?)
Clairey36 chapter 33 . 6/2/2014
Please update soon, I really love your stories :)
meme chapter 33 . 12/3/2013
Please don't end it here. Please ;-;
lunareternalbluecomplete chapter 33 . 9/7/2013
I love your work and was wondering if you were going to continue with this story?
Of Soul Fire chapter 33 . 6/11/2013
Omaigurd
Amazing
It's making my head hurt
That's how amazing it is!
Danm, I really need a cool down fic now...

Keep up the good work, the drama is amazing, the conflict is put across expertly... I can throw myself into this story and 'feel' all the pain the characters are going through...

I kind of want to kill you for making them unable to use their pokemon. After all even if they can't command their pokemon, they can still form that bond that the pokemon series emphasizes so much, the ties of friendship! The pokemon don't have to fight FOR Dawn and Paul, they could instead fight WITH them... They may not be human, but they're still the people they were before, right? (Although I understand how bringing in the pokemans would take the action away from Dawn and Paul) BUT THINK OF THE TEAMWORK!

Btw, is it possible for Dawn and Paul be captured like pokemon now?
DarkMgc chapter 33 . 1/21/2013
I remember reading this! I Loved this ! I still love it ! Poor Dawn... Btw I like ur version of Paul! Ikarishipping yaaaay!
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 33 . 12/23/2012
That was sad. I'm really worried that she's gonna die... :(
reppad98 chapter 33 . 12/22/2012
Okay, when I first read the whole Pokémorphs thing, I really thought "What the-?" Honestly, I never read stories like that, but because the first story was so awesome, I continued reading. And it turned out to be amazing, and it only got better. You're really a talented writer!
So... I like this story, so thanks for writing this and please update soon!
piplup-pokefan chapter 33 . 12/14/2012
Thanks! I'm so glad you're continuing this story! It's so good!
Iloveikari chapter 33 . 12/11/2012
Gaya! Another chapter! PLEASE PLEASE DON'T LET DAWN DIE! SHE'S THE ONE RESON THAT IKARISHIPPING IS HERE!

I can't wait until the next chapter! Update when you can!
Bella02 chapter 32 . 9/26/2012
Hey! So ur such. Ana amazing writer. I love how u do all ur story's especially this won it's An amazing story hope u update soon love bella :)
Isabella chapter 32 . 7/8/2012
This story is rlly good so far, i couldnt stop reading it! I just love ikari! I cant wait to read more! Please update soon!
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