I want to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. I'm sorry that I didn't review every chapter; I was so anxious to see what happened next I couldn't stop to review.

I liked the pacing; I think you did a really good job. I also liked how you captured Harry's emotions, really well done. I can't think of other parts just now because it's late but I promise you I liked it :)

I liked it! It was a sad, yet cute story. Even though, I could imagine a sequel of sorts where Ron and Harry are older (like, out of Hogwarts older) and Ron gets some sort of revenge on the Dursleys. I don't mean death, more like extreme pain or intimidation or something. Just a thought! Keep up the good work! xD

It's fantastic for a first fanfic! The sex was a little anticlimactic though.

Expecting more from you! Likelike 3

A good based story, though there are a few points I would like to bring up in order to help you make this better.

For one, expand the story. Let emotions, thoughts come through. The environment, the movements and the observations - let them come out and you get longer chapters. That way, you can also put in other stuff, as of flashbacks in small pieces as well as the source of actions and deeds.

Instead of revealing everything in a short time, it is better to drag it out, as it makes the reader more curious. A flashback is always better when it is only parts of it - at least in my opinion. Snippets and teasers. Like muttered words, screamed words, hands or eyes, darkness or a sunny day.

Otherwise.. quite good story. Perhaps a little fast-going. Oh, and I have to point it out from the last chapter - I believe it is. You have written "scared thighs" which is wrong. That means thighs that are afraid or frightened. I believe you meant "scarred" which is, in this case, thighs with scars. I am uncertain if this was just a random error, or a mistake you make without thought.

Good luck!

I think it should stay fluffy. It doesn't seem realistic if Harry allows sex just now; he just got back from a summer of torture and rape.

Awwww. Despite how cheesy Harry's explanation of 'what kept him going' was, that was still pretty cute. You're doing a wonderful job with this fic and I can't wait to read more!

It's been 7 days since you updated and I'm dying to read the rest of it! And we desperatly want lemons!

Lovess

Tor x

I would greatly appreciate a lemon chap :D

Awwwwww! I really really like this story! Quite possibly one of the best HarryxRon fics I've had the pleasure to read :D I sincerely hope you are able to continue with it because I can't wait to read more!

Although it's true that this plot has been done before, you do a really good job of writing it without grammar mistakes or ridiculous spelling errors and the writing is comfortable and well done. I also like how the dialogue isn't stilted or forced. I've tried writing my own stories before and I know how difficult simple-seeming things like that can be.

OMG! UPDATE! Amzing! lovein i !

Like this story a lot. poor Harry but of course Ron has to be there. Please continue :)

i like this story, its well written and it pulls you in. please update soon!

please keep going! i love it! im big on the whole harry ron relationship slash or i love the vulnerable harry two favorite aspects in one!thanks for writing! keep it up please!

i really like the story so far :D i can;t wait for more!