i just came back to the fandom and i really like your story!
hope you will continue some day.

Oh no! It’s a cliff hanger of doom! I understand being busy and not having a lot of inspiration. Just wanted to reach out and tell you that even incomplete this is still one of my favorite fanfics. Hope life is good for ya!

awesome fic,
please update I really really really wanna know what happen next
thanks

i do hope you continue writing this story. i cant wait to see where it goes.

wasnt expecting that! will zoro still have gotten wado from koshiro? anxiously waiting for the next chapter!

Oh finally! I waited so long for this chapter! Please continue. It's great!

My gasp when I saw what benn asked was so profound that I took in all the oxygen in my bedroom. Thanks. I appreciate the suffocation. On a much happier note I really loved the chapter! Thanks for the update!

Hey,
it's great you continue because I was thinking about this story quite a lot, wondering how it would continue.
So thanks for uploading.
I really like that you put some action in it with Tashigi (And I'm glad Zoro gets his essay done...) even though I'm shocked Zoro is supposed to be a swords thief (Which he isn't we know!).
Together with that interesting note Ben left at the end there is a lot potential for what can happen and I'm really looking forward to it.
I wonder if and how Zoro will finally find out about Mihawk and I kind of love that they both are already going crazy concerning their own feelings and thinking about another.

Please keep up the great work and if you ever do need help or a sparring partner for your ideas, I'll be more than happy to assist you (although English isn't my native language so I can help you only so far if it comes to that ;-))

Thank you very much for uploading

Sharry

I reeeeeally want to know and read more. Love this pairing and love this story **

Hey,
So long time ago I read this story but then life happened and I lost it (and did not even follow it o.o)
Now I'm really glad I found it again (even though I should be studying right now).
Your world building is quite good and the way you picture the charakteres is nice, especially Mihawk is on spot.
Zoro sometimes is a tiny bit off, but I can see that you let him act that way so he fits better into the story development.
The side story of Shanks and Benn is actually almost the best! It's really cool and makes me laugh the whole time.
The only thing I have to critizise is the permanently swichting of the point of view. I understand that you want to show all the little details, everyone is feeling (which is really a good job), but sometimes as a reader it is really difficult to read when the thoughts are from Mihawk, the next sentence is a switch to Shanks and after that it's Zoro. It would be nice of you to pay a little more attention to this.
But except for that your story is really good and I am hooked on it.
If you ever need somebody to talk over your story line or writing problems (or anything else) I would be more than happy to assist you. My english is not the best to be honest (I am german) but I work hard! ;-)
Thank you for this fanfiction and keep up the great work!
Sharry

I love this so far! Super excited to see what happens next! :D

OMG HE CALLED HIM DEAR! Like it was sarcastic bit it was there! Great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!

I almost forgot! I vote for Crocodile too! Eheheh :D

OMG! an update! ! ! ! I'm so happy! ! ! Please don't stop! *cheers* :3

I'm so happy to see that this story is back and with a new chapter.