| Reviews for Of Western Stars |
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   MayaniMoon chapter 1 . 7/15 I'd give this fanfic a 4.7/10. This fanfic really disappointed me. I was so excited to read it beacuse the summary sounded amazing, it was complete, and was over 100k pages. When I first started this fanfic I was every excited, but by the time I got to the end I was very disappointed. Every chapter I read just made me annoyed. I didnt really like the plot or the way the time and povs jump around. One thing really annoyed/disappointed me was that the chapters were really short. By chapter, I mean the 25-60 percent (depending on the chapter) of the chapter that was devoted to the plot. Not the 40-75 percent (depending on the chapter) of the chapter that was devoted to the questions (?). I love reading really long Fanfics, so by the time I was ten chapters in and realized that the 110k pages were incorrect really disappointed me. I was goning to rate this fanfic higher but then I thought about all rlthe better ones I read. Sorry if this offends you or hurts your feelings but I'm trying to as honest as possible so that you can grow as a writer. Or you could ignore and about you business. At the end of the day this is my opinion. |
| Guest chapter 31 . 6/1 He's free They're alive I'm sorry U r da best |
| Guest chapter 30 . 6/1 I am internally screaming curse words |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/1 ... Pettigrew is a little piece of shit |
| Guest chapter 28 . 6/1 If he is dead, (Sirius or Harry) I will about curse words to any day I ever see and kill them all with lung puncturing. :( |
| Guest chapter 27 . 6/1 NO! HE WILL NOT! AZKABAN IS A- PETER- little piece of shit... |
| Guest chapter 26 . 6/1 KILL PETER NOW HE WILL KILL HARRY OR WORSE |
| Guest chapter 26 . 6/1 Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait Wait PETER? |
| Guest chapter 23 . 6/1 *screams* NOOO |
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/1 '-' please let this end well I'm hooked |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/1 Not sure if that happened or not |
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/1 Gasp |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/1 When they ask you how you are and you just have to say that you're fine, when you're being not really fine, but you can't get into it because they'd never understand... |
| Guest chapter 10 . 6/1 Harry better be ok... I HAVE A LOT OF FEELS RIGHT NOW AND THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD I CRIED HALF THE MISSISSIPPI RIVER! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/1 WAAAAAAAAAAA SADNESSSS HELLO DARKNESS MY OLD FRIEND |
