KEEP WRITING

Please continue! Thanks!

Update this please. I know it's been a while but it's a good story and you can't end it there xx

omg you have to finish this!i cant make it any clearer than the fact that you NEED to finish this!

Good story! I'd love for there to be a little fluff in this to balance out the angst. I'd love to see Rachel and Noah be happy-both in a romantic relationship with each other and as a family with Beth. I really hope that Rachel gets the professional help that she needs and benefits from that. Thank you for sharing this with us. Please update when you can.

woooow love this story!

This is seriously on my Top 5 favorite FFs on this site. Aside from some trivial spelling mistakes it's amazing, the story and the way you tell it are just fantastic. Bold, capitalized, exclamation points fantastic. Can't wait for an update .

I liked this chapter. I like how you could see rachels downward spiral. I like pucks explantion of why they aren't together. Their relationship is so complicated. I'm glad you had rachel slit her wrists. It seemed like the perfect reaction for someone in rachels position. She's going through so much and she's so insecure. Noah saying that was just the tipping point. I wonder how everyone will react to her incident. And will everyone find out about what puck said?

Also, goodluck with life! Keep strong cause things will eventually get better! Also school should be starting up soon, right? Enjoy it cause Freshman year of college is the best!

Wonderful story... Sad but highly addictive!

I swear, I cry in every chapter of this story. This chapter was no exception. Excellent as always!

Hi.. i dont noe if u are updating the story or not since its been a while.. but u shld know that its been sitting in under favorites in my account for a while now.. :)

I love seeing this angsty side of rachel.. its a nice change.

and im really looking foward to seeing puck pov cause truthfully, im kinda confused by his actions. he seems hot and cold.

It'll be great to know how he feels seeing beth agn, his true feeling for rachel and if he notice how much rachel had chged..

And i love your style of writting.. its straight to point yet u still manage to keep all the emotions intact.

so heres hoping that u are not abandoning the story cause its been a wonderful read.. so thank you.. :D

Wow ... This was an emotional chapter. She's on a roller coaster of emotions that are gonna take their toll. Can't wait to read more.

Oh, mi, gosh...Shelby's dead...This chapter was SO well written! I cried when Shelby died and at Rachel's reaction when she went to Pucks house! I love this story, so please, please, PLEASE update soon! :)

You don't know how happy I am to see this new chapter, I was crying for Rachel and Shelby, for Beth and Puck and for Puck and Rachel. Just gahhhh, I reallly want to punch Puck though, but after the last bit I want to hug him and tell him to look after her.

I Can't wait for the next chapter.

Ellle xx

loved it - great chapter so much emotion you have written this really well:) please UD soon:)