Reviews for Crumbled
thehazeleyedloser chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
pretty good, all things considering what's known about the epilogue.

-— deanna
Miss No-Eyebrows chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
It's great! I loved it~

Fantastic ;)
emmie333 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Yes, i did enjoy! I think it was really good! I was also expecting something different...but Im not disapointed!
Midori Yoshida chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I really enjoyed this! The emotion and mood in the story were right on. Well done.
Neeecole66 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
This is a very good plotline but in future you need to check your spelling and grammar.
Mockingjay1804 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
i REALLY like this story, especially from the kid's point of view.

please finish!
Flomo chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
i didnt really like it, katni and peeta seemed alittle ooc~
bcds chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I liked this story... it would be great if you would continue it. Good luck!
DramaticFanaticPrincess chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I liked it. and the names are the same ones that I always imagined the children having. great story.
rawrzez chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
This is really great. I hope you won't keep it a one-shot. You should definitely write more! :) It's just that awesome. And it's very in character, something that most people struggle with. Congrats! :)
LovePeeta chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
This is really good! I like the idea of Peeta and Katniss having a forbidden room where everything is kept. I also like how Cinna and Rue's personalities are portrayed. Good job!
Leiaa768 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I absolutely love your story so far! I really like the depth you've given both Rue and Cinna and I feel as if I already know them. I also like Daddy Peeta! He's awesome. Anyway, I really think you should continue and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.

ps- I adore the kids' names.