Great. That was awesome. I totally pictured Ozai getting flipped. (if that actually happened in the show, everything would be messed up. no way it'd be THAT easy). Nice job.

This is pretty amusing so far, will definitely keep reading :) Just some friendly help: "Sae la vie," is spelt 'C'est la vie' as it is French and directly translates as 'it is the life'

Jet looked at him and rolled his eyes. "When you want something – go for it. So long as you don't want to kill people" LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOL! Little out of character are we Jet. But still love the story so far.

...*rereads* 'a few elderly folks were bird-walking.' Bird-walking? This must be a more 'alternate' universe than I thought.

Yeah! No regrets, Zuko. Nice job.

Zuko, your closet is so see-through it's transparent.

This is almost totally unrelated to anything, but I thought of a great pun! It's rather Iroh-nic.
A wild SOCIOPATH appeared!
So I guess Zuko's crushed on another dude before. Interesting. I wonder where this world's equivalent of Mai is?

Cool! I'll check it out!

Oh, Zuko. Zuko, Zuko, Zuko.
Don't you know that the more serious you are, the more likely people are to make fun of you?
It's a scientific fact!

Yay random Death Note and V For Vendetta references! :D

You know, ever since i read this the first time i've been thinking about it, and i think Zuko and Yue would make really good friends. Even in canon, if the Fire Nation weren't so ...hostile, they would have gotten along well together.

Keheheh, Zuzu really is /such/ an emo. :D

I think this is my third time reading this story, but i keep forgetting to review. I love how you write Jet! It's so in-character, even though he comes from a world without high school! Nice job! But i think my favorite part of this chapter is when Toph gut-punches him.

Ha! We can hear you macking! I loved it! XD

What the fuck you go on and build his character then destroy it what the fuck I love it.