Reviews for Unspoken Words
Guest chapter 12 . 11/25/2019
I think you should continue this story as a matter of fact I think you should put it all in one big one big story from HP fan girl 222
Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2019
Kill off Dumbles, then, put Harry in a different home with someone who really lovs him.
Camille785 chapter 5 . 10/19/2019
OMG I was scared shitless of Roald Dahl's "Witches" when I was young! I asked my parents about a week ago where the book was, but I havent found it yet.
Lamorak Korving chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
There isn't anything wrong with refusing to talk. If I had a majorly evil Dark Lord such as
Voldemort after me, and my friends spied on me for Dumbledore, I wouldn't talk much,
either.
InkTheDemon chapter 7 . 6/26/2018
'May the best team win'
WE WILL...
I'm stealing that like ml so sassy yet smooooooth brevs
sorry if you cant read my weird talking/writing style
Guest chapter 5 . 4/10/2018
11-year olds don't date. That's just wrong they're way to young. I mean having crushes is normal but when you date you're considering marriage and that's just not what an eleven year old is going to be thinking about.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/10/2018
You said Sirius had light brown hair that is how the movies presented him but he has black hair it is mentioned numerous times in the books. Have you read them? Or was it just a slip up on your part? I'm enjoying your story so far. Well done.
Guest chapter 19 . 11/24/2017
What happened?
Guest chapter 10 . 11/24/2017
Absolutely stunning. This was a beautiful heart-warming chapter to read.
SortingHat chapter 6 . 9/24/2017
This is a good high on LCD fic. I am sure the majority of readers are so high they won't remember a thing they read so are just being polite.
SortingHat chapter 4 . 9/24/2017
Too bad you made Harry a douche about being a slave to Dumbledore. I am not sure why this is put into the (Dark,Independent Harry) fanfic community which is where I found it. Clerical error perhaps?
SortingHat chapter 2 . 9/24/2017
I wonder what it would've been like during WW2 especially the early years when daily night raids were constant. I bet Quidditch was often canceled due to air raids and night time had blackout laws.
SortingHat chapter 3 . 9/24/2017
However teller robberys do not yield as much cash but a much higher success rate. They usually yield around 5 to 8K per robbery and it's best to use 50s and 100s. 20s tend to have dye packs in them or some sort of tracking charm as they are the most common amount of dollars. As for 5s and 10s it would be suspecious if a passerby saw a clerk suddenly clear out a bunch of money from the drawer down to the bottom.

One successful bank robber has his story after willingly turning himself in to police after a decade on the run. He even got a bank teller in trouble who pocketed 100$ for herself during one of his most memorable robberies.
SortingHat chapter 2 . 9/24/2017
Actually Gringotts could be robbed successfully. Most bank robbers get caught because they usually go for the deep vault and something gets screwed up or they usually wave a weapon. On average bank robbers can go a long long time without being caught and screw up when they brag to their friends who turn them in for a reward or they make a mistake during a robbery.

Those who don't use weapons but use notes tend to not be on the news cycle as TV news is just not interested unless a gun was used or displayed. (even if it's fake). TV's love to make sensation out of guns way out of proportion.
SortingHat chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
I completely understand why the author abandoned this for several reasons. One if your going to make Harry mute you need to come with a creative solution to get rid of it. I don't like mute fics that are there just for the hell of it. I like seeing a solution arise that's permanent since this is the Wizard world we're talking about.

Two. The author's computer likely broke down. On smartphones (which big industry has been pushing for since the Windows 8 disaster with the whole Metro crap) you can't type very well on them. It's a pain in the butt. So most people casually view them. On YouTube my PS3 goes immediately to the mobile version and comments are not even there!

That is likely why so many videos struggle now who are new as older established channels like Pewee or Gilva Sunner were around when computers were relevant and cheaper for everyday use. Now they are just expensive gaming machines that cost your entire collage funds and notebooks still are not up to snuff.

Even Apple has dumbed their UI down in their Sierra release. Type GUI's getting dumber in Duck Duck Go. Don't do it in Google as they have (truth) sensors and se what I mean plus there is very little in software. Hell I'm not getting a Switch till more outside software comes out.
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