I love this story. Like, really, really love it. The characterisation is amazing, the plot looks interesting, and it's generally a very well-written story.

Please hurry and write more?

Hello again, Blue. Terribly sorry not to have read this earlier, but my computer had become gravely ill and required dismantling.

Ezio is one dense assassino, huh? Oh well. At least Leonardo loves him regardless. once agn, I find myself in need to praise your use of words. My own heart melted while reading this. I will forever remain a fan of your works

This is intriguing! I wish to read moar 83

what was his plan. Please tell. I'll die if you don't *dies* It's a really good story, and I hope that you continue with it

I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

"What other reason could there be?" Oh Ezio, you adorable dope. And here I thought they both had the hots for each other... guess not, but this makes it more interesting. Can't wait to see how their relationship develops.

Like the others have said, this story has so much promise. Please, update soon!

Okay, so I know you said it might be a while before you work on this, and I completely understand the apathy toward writing. But pleasepleaseplease work on this soon - it seriously has so much promise, but it's too short for me to really feel satisfied in any way, if that makes sense.

very well written. i like the way ezio and leo interact with each other. im looking forward to you finishing this.

i hope you dont write it too hot...sometimes the story profits more from a subtle writing style than from showing explicit scenes...

I loved it. It was so touching. Leonardo would forever see Ezio in light of the good he stands for. I have always thought that it is always easier to notice something if it does not involve you directly. It is for this reason that we must occasionally put our minds into perspective. Sorry, little rant. Always good hearing from you. Happy holidays!

This was beautifully written. I really enjoy your descriptive style. Ezio and Leo interact with each other in such a warm, familiar, subtle, and natural way that doesn't seem forced.

I loved that Ezio has doubts about his way of life and that he seems to look to Leo for assurance. Leo's concern for Ezio's well being, both physical and mental was quite sweet as well.

Please continue. This is great. :)