Reviews for Bella Whitlock, HBIC
andrewpine chapter 17 . 1/15
I wonder if they ever tried to mix blood and alcohol together?
Curious to see who her replacement will be and will they try to change what she has done or keep it and improve on it?
andrewpine chapter 14 . 1/15
They should set up a system of blood banks then they would not destroy the ecosystem by wiping the local wildlife,screw Carlisle and his whining about killing humans. is dead and gone where else did you post the scent of fear?
andrewpine chapter 13 . 1/15
You idiots dumped the ruling of the vampire world in a twenty something newborn and then get pissed when she loses her cool,dumb asses.n
andrewpine chapter 11 . 1/15
Can't remember if I asked this ,but what did they do about the wives . Jasper just cannot stop being a dickhead can't he.
Looks like Bella did get her Good with weird thing from Renee.
andrewpine chapter 6 . 1/15
I can't decide who is more immature Emmett or Jasper.
Instead of putting up with Carlisle's bullshit why not take Eleazar in his place and then let Esme adjust his problem while they are gone on their world way knowing just how immature Jasper is this would keep the arguments over him way down.
Bella Marie Whitlock chapter 17 . 12/29/2019
I had to read these again because I enjoyed them so much the first time!

I love your work and count Sassafrass and HBIC as one of the sources of inspiration for much of my own. Your version of Bella will always be one of my favourites and the side storyline of her motherhood and fractured-then-healed relationship with the pack is so beautiful from start to finish!

Can't express enough how grateful I am that you wrote these! And the epilogue is the perfect ending and ties up all the loose ends so exquisitely!

Blessings Always,
-BMW
rachel625 chapter 17 . 12/3/2019
Wow! I loved it so much! This (as well as the one before) was such a well written story! Thank you so much for sharing this incredible story!
celajwhitney chapter 14 . 6/4/2019
way to ask nicely jake after the way you talked to Bella last time! yes i know i didn't capitalize jakes name, but he's a little man so he'll get a little letter!
celajwhitney chapter 11 . 6/3/2019
great chapter, thanks !
celajwhitney chapter 7 . 6/3/2019
sorry i just can't picture Garrett as gay. i guess i just swooned to much of Lee Pace in Twilight and Lord of the Rings.
andrewpine chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
Maybe you can post scent of fear on AO3 please since is no more.
andrewpine chapter 13 . 10/18/2018
I gather is no longer a viable site? They dump all of this Crap on a newborn then he gets pissy when she loses it and complains that he isn't treated like a proper mate and husband when he does great her the same way he believes he should be can screw himself the whiny little bitch.
andrewpine chapter 9 . 10/17/2018
I hope Tanya finds her mate soon.
andrewpine chapter 6 . 10/16/2018
Why doesn't she use shock therapy in him every time he has his urges she should zap him with some nasty emotions until he is afraid to have said thoughts?
andrewpine chapter 4 . 10/16/2018
Really should have written that they could drink alcohol make for more fuckery they can get into.
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