Dude please update this awesome story. I'm finding too many unfinished stories these days and it's getting on my nerves. Please I can't wait for the next chapter.

this is good hope you continue it someday

/Aw, what a cliffhanger.

Thanks for writing.

/I was never very interested in the Potter/Dresden crossovers where they are both young. Actually, I'm not sure that I've across more than one other. I like what you've done here, though.

Thanks for writing.

The outsiders are trying to break through, huh? Did Harry change that history of his world or is it something that always been happening but only now becoming visible.

Great your potter is too much of a whiny brat.

I hope you continue this, it is very good.

I really wished you hadn't stopped this. So much potential wasted.

Truly, an incredibly written fic. Best Dresden fic I've read, by far, and one of my favorite HPs. You characterize everyone perfectly.

I'll do a more in-depth review of this fic when I'm near a physical keyboard.

Very exciting chapter. I was sitting on the edge of my chair reading it..heart pounding. Woo!

why on earth would harry want to summon a demon? summoning a demon, or a fae, for that matter, regardless of whether he's actually capable of doing so, would be among the dumbest things he's ever done.

Magnificent story, please write more.

Oh, what a cliffhanger. And you've ended it there? Whyyyy.. This is one of the best stories in the Potter/Dresden crossover category T.T

oops... XD

Yay!