I started fangirling when I read Bianca's name. I'm guessing you got her name from 10 Things I Hate About You? I started laughing when I read the part where she was his ex.

I absolutely love this story, and I think you portray Arthur's character really well.

AND I TALK LIKE THAT TOO!(sometimes)

I'm not a cat person or a dog person, I like both. I'm still curious as to why most of the FanFiction community believes Ariadne has a cat.

"No, I don't care about the plan. Look how much food this is!" LOL i love that line :)

bloody brilliant looove this story, wished it was longer or something that had them coming back to visit the family.

Me likey this chappy too! Also, i think i just spelled my name differently in every review i posted.. that takes skill.

likey the chappy

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That was a thoroughly enjoyable story. I liked your characterization of all the characters and how Rachel even turned out likable(almost). I liked your mental ramblings for the characters in story, honestly it made them feel more real especially the 99 bottles of beer song. Arthur's dad was very likable and of course Arthur and Ariadne were the best part. Wonderful story.

That was so good! I'm kinda depressed it's finished though.

But yes! Every single one of the twenty chapters was brilliant! :D I loved every single word of it.

I also now have a huge hole in my life to fill because this is over.

Sequel? Please? *bats eyelashes*

Haha I really liked your story! If it is over you should place it in the complete category. I loved the dry humour and simpleness of it all, 'cause even though you're playing on a field where things get very complex you kept the plot pretty subdued which is a good thing in Inception ff. The possibility of dream theft kinda gives you all the complexity you need in the story but some authors find it difficult to work with because they might have their own complex ideas. Anyway I will miss reading the updates on this story. It's come a long way since the starting point. I wish you luck in writing more fanfiction in the future!

Yours sincerely,

~Alexxis T. Swan

okay, i LOVED the ending and how you explained how arthur doesn't press and how that would tear him apart. it was beautiful. love it love it love it.

A lovely conclusion to a lovely tale. Thanks so much for your dedication to completing this story, for your wonderfully frequent updates, and for your remarkably entertaining sense of humor.

Good luck with college, any future writing endeavors! ;)

Oh, and thanks for "The Hobbit" reference in the title of your final chapter. You have once again solidified your place in the book of awesome!

WOOHOO! I can't tell whether to be satisfied or sad that this story's over. And the ending just works great - neat endings can sort of kill the imagination. So congrats on tying up all those loose ends in one whopping chapter! This was a great read. Good luck in college! And I hope you'll continue writing fanfiction!

Awww...great chapter. I do have to admit I am sad to see it end. It was one of my favorite stories and everytime I got an email saying the next chapter was up I nearly flipped from excitement. So that's something that I'll miss. I'm happy with the ending. It's always neat to see different writer's takes on endings, whereas I prefer to complete and clear things up, others like to leave the ending up to you. I get all happy when Arthur and Ariadne are together, it's just too cute! :D Haha...well I guess this is my last review, I will definitely try to keep in touch! Don't get too busy or overwhelmed with classes and work! I believe in you! So this isn't goodbye, but a talk to you soon! :D Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with me and the rest of us on fanfiction!

What a lovely ending... You have done very well, thank you! And the Soda cans... how about this: As Rachel and Ariadne were shooed out of the room by the night nurse while still being distracted by their conversation and as the night nurse was distracted by shooing out the two of them and looking after a sleeping Eames, the Soda cans made the best of the situation of general distractedness and escaped to a different part of the Multiverse, where the great King Coke rules forever in the land of Fizz and all Soda cans can live happily ever after. After all, you never now what a particle is doing while you are not watching. It might be everywhere at once.

Until another time!