Ah, sad ending. But I loved how you wrote this, it's really simple and sweet, and Ted is awesome.

Please stop writing like this.

This is too fucking perfect and I just really cant handle it all.

There are to many feels and I advise you to just stop it ok.
But seriously your writing is perfect, this story is perfect, and I love you.

wow. so much emotion in such few words. i'm impressed.

This actually was pretty sweet... _ 3

wow, short and perfect.

This was beautiful

This is really good.

Poor Barney. He's like my favorite character. How about a sequel on the aftermath? Like how Ted will feel later. If Lilly is okay, I always imagined some brother/sister relationship between Barney/Lilly. How Barney will feel, I think he will need support because he might have feelings for Ted and doesn't know what to do. I know, very OOC.

Wow. Hot and powerful.

Awwwwwe! :( short, sweet, and sad. LOVED it. You should definiatly keep writing for this fandom.

This was so awesome. Poor Barney, being secretly in love with Ted, I guess. Actually I have no idea why he's weeping but the story was still beautiful!

Love the image you put in my head. So sweet yet sad. I liked this alot ;)