Why you never update this - are you mad?
Only kidding... come back please!

uh-oh :

Kim saying tonron i am sorry for ending our marriage and partnership take me back please

im sorry, but when you put the words 'whos he gonna call' in a title, my natural reflex is to yell GHOSTBUSTERS!

Holds two fingers to forehead. Kim Possible is going off to college and she's put off discussing this with her best freind/boyfriend Ron Stoppable knowing that he wasn't coming with her and either they have already broken up because of the distance thing or Kim is about to.

She is either looking forward to all the opportunities and wants to tell Ron 'we'll always be tight' (just like she did in the tree house just before StD) or will not say anything..

Ron spirals into a world of pity and Kim goes on to become some great person.

Nice start. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Sir,

I'm not sure what Kim's rationale for breaking Ron's heart is. Why exactly would she tell him in June it's not the end of the world, and so happy that he came to outer space for her, on top of how she said in Ill-Suited that she wanted to date HIM as long as he stayed honest - why do that and then do what she did here?

But there's something that puzzles me far more than that.

Are you not Everhere Everthere, the author of "The Things I Never Knew"? Do you know them and they passed the account on to you? You say this is your first fanfiction, so I'm assuming you're not the same person but perhaps connected to the same person. See, your profile shows Everhere's stories, as if Everhere has renamed their nickname (which is possible on the site).

hi I'm a vet of this website as well as a few others if you need help just ask and you will get it and some advice when writing a story please make sure that you use Microsoft word or something like that so you can read what you wrote and then send it to a "BETA" reader so they can proof read it etc anyways welcome to Fanfiction yours Enterprisecv-6

Even though it's a stort start, it's is a great start! I'm already looking forward to what comes next! Keep it coming! ;)

Love,MeKp

P.S.: I love your nickname. Haha!

Interesting start here, TS. I admit I'm not huge on the 'splitting up Kim an Ron' thing for some of the drama, but I'm sure that you have a reason for it. Looking forward to how this goes.