This is one of the best written and most imagenitive stories I have read in a long long time!

BLOODY FANTASTIC !

Thanks muches for sharing your story with me...

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)

Really fantastic story. I thank you for writing it.

oooh! About to read the sequel:)

Great story!

So many mysteries left open:)

Great story! Thanks for sharing:)

Well, on to the sequel!

"Rosalie watched as, hackles raised, Jacob bared his teeth at the menace above. He gave a look back at Rosalie and growled. Rosalie cut loose with an instinctive primal growl that would have left Jacob shaking, had it been aimed at him."

Rosalie & Jacob have become quite the duo::))

"Alice helped him with the sweat pants she had grabbed for him, all the while humming some silly tune and giggling" Ha Ha Ha If I was Alice, I would be laughing so hard I couldn't dress Jake::))

"Jenna? That is the name you are using now?" Huh? So Jenna isn't her real name:)

"Cory is Corin, brother to Caius of the Volturi."

That may explain why Caius hates werewolves so much! Either cause a werewolf infected his brother or cause he just plain hates his brother:)

"You'll want to go, then Edward will want to go, to protect you. Then Emmett will feel the need to go, to protect Edward. Next thing you know, everybody will be there." LOL LOL how true! Jenna knows them well:)

Between Jake & Rose, E & B have built-in babysitters::))

Ha Ha Ha the earthquake "around McCarty spring"! Must have been Emmett & Rose out last night having their 'personal time'::)) LOL

Jacob is fitting in with everyone real well! Guess imprinting on a half vamp will mellow you out a bit::))

"So...what do you think of your real mom?" Birth mom. Renee is her real mom.

I have a feeling that Bella didn't loose any 'gifts' when becoming a vampire:)

So Bella didn't loose at least the healing gift when she became a vampire. Wonder if she can do the shape shifting her mother does?

:)

"Jenna shimmered and was instantly clean, body, hair, and clothes" I was thinking if Bella hadn't become a vampire (& survived the birth) she would be missing out on so many cool things - like the speed & strength. But, if Bella was anything like Jenna, there would have been many cool things without being a vamp::))

Good chapter!