This gave me chills. Can't wait to read more! Update ASAP, please! :)

Very nice...I'd like to hear mor. :)

WOW... incredible. Very short, but said everything it needed to. D

I really liked this short story. I wish you would have written more! I was getting into it then it was over. I could picture this in my head as I was reading and I was a little scared, like I was there in the basement with the child. I want you to keep going so I can find out what happens and what made the mother commit these acts of violence!

... Tears up... Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Koai that that is deap