Newfound respect for the man?
Snape is not worth a tiny ounce of respect. That pathetic man deserves the life sentence in Azkaban that Dumbledore special-treatmented him out of.

I've noticed that you have Hermione misspelled in this chapter best to check the other chapters as well looks like you've got your the O in the wrong spot

what the fuck is this?

this went from a pretty decent fanfic to a prank in and of itself.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

chapter 21 was like... the most confusing thing i have ever read...
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I loved it!

That's not a good idea cos the 'Imperio-d' death eaters will just claim that they put on the mask to hide the drawings.

That was absolutely hilarious! I loved that scene with them singing Bohemian Rhapsody, the fact that they would not have had the faintest clue what they were singing about only makes it funnier.

"The ending you envisioned" is crap.

oooookay...um...

What happened to the Yule Ball? - That could've been funny.

What happened to Christmas? Boy, the year went so fast.

your...you're
there...their...they're

Not a bad story, but you really should go over it and correct the spelling, grammar, and word choice errors. For example, Dumbledore should have said they had ways of *extracting* the truth from someone, not 'abstracting' the truth. It distracts from the story enough that I'm done reading after this chapter. I advise that you get a beta, and keep on writing!

he's only done two or three pranks. what kind of marauder, but honestly for this for someone 10 and lower maturity other wise it probably won't seem funny, just stupid

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