Reviews for Broken
CallaRose4ever chapter 12 . 2/5
wow it has been years I know you said in your last update that none of your stories have been abandoned. I was just hoping that it is still true? I just found this story and am looking forward to more.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/8/2018
I admire the depth of the introspection on war. Please continue the story if you have the time.
AliceRose21 chapter 12 . 7/30/2018
I love how different this story is compared to other Hermione x Jasper stories (a pairing which I have found that I also love) please update soon :)
SaphireFlame1 chapter 12 . 6/21/2018
I love this story... I still hope to find out how this bond-thing that marcus sees works, how it will work out between Hermione and Jasper, what happened with alice...

I hope you find the time to write again! Read you soon!
IncrediBookworm chapter 12 . 6/17/2018
Good story! Please update
afraidofspiders chapter 12 . 4/29/2018
I just binged this story and I'm in love and I hope you haven't completely given up
Guest chapter 12 . 3/4/2018
Update? Please? It’s been 2 years :,(
Guest chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
The hops between first person and third person are a little confusing.
Umi chapter 1 . 12/31/2017
Sounds like a great beginning!
Tommy14 chapter 11 . 11/19/2017
I've just finished rereading your story and wanted to say how much I still enjoy seeing this harder war experienced Hermione. I was amused by Jasper's feelings of pride and lust watching Hermione kickass and take names. Love seeing this passionate Marcus and knowing his and Hermione's history. Thanks for the wonderful read.
Witch with the Cat chapter 12 . 11/11/2017
First of: how are you? Are things getting better? Is life better now?
Now I wanted to apologise for my mistakes, English is not my first language.
This fanfiction is truly an amazing piece of art! The plot is great, I love the idea of Hermione becoming a vampire because Marcus is interested in her. Characters are amazing! I mean Hermione is so much like her, or at least she is exactly like I imagined her to be after the war. She's fierce, brilliant, brave and reasonable. And Jasper! He is perfect! Marcus is great too, we don't know much about him and you gave him great motivation, we finally know why he was so apathetic. Besides Aro and Caius are truly amazing and yes I know they're bad, I know.
Hermione's memories are so great! This whole thing is great! I know I'm repeating myself but your fanfiction is amazing!
Thank you for writing it, I hope you will finish it but if you won't then thank you for sharing this awesomeness with us. Reading this was a pleasure.
Reine du Destin chapter 12 . 6/8/2017
This story is amazing..! Please update... I cant wait to see what happens next
DramionetomioneOTP chapter 12 . 4/29/2017
Update soon!
Lauramichca chapter 12 . 4/20/2017
Take your time. Reality is that life happens.
A very interesting read that you're crafting here. I hope you finish it one day! Oh, but watch out for inconsistances because of time you spent away dealing with real life - I think Hermione was introduced to her class with Jasper twice in ealier chapters - not a big deal, easily read around or misconstrued (and possibly it is I that have done so here), but a pitfall of life interrupting.

Whether you finish this or not
Thanks for sharing
LovingYou2 chapter 12 . 12/22/2016
Hope u continue soon
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