I loved this story

Very sweet and cute to read.

I cried. This story was absolutely amazing.

I'm surprised that at this late date (2011) that you have Hermione's age wrong. Movie watcher instead of book reader?

Absolutely brilliant. Loved it. Had me fooled at the end, so glad u kept Severus alive.

Not cool. You made us think that Severus was dead.

Merlin, no, not really. If they do go all the way there's usually a tendency to have the overdone prengnancy ark, which I've had more then sufficient of. Thank you

That was fast. Oh well, love it anyway. Thank you!

...a panther named Phoenix. O.o... o-kay then.

Dear Author, you're in dire need to hire a beta. It is a good one but too many plot holes, you should rewritten this story if I were you.

OMG this was the best story that I have ever read. Please continue.

This fic feels more like a rough draft due to the typos and mistakes. I strongly suggest a beta or a friend edit your work. It is amazing how much a second set of eyes can help. With that said, I liked the story and give you kudos for posting and following through to the end of the story.

I've had to stop reading. Your spelling and grammar has gotten worse and worse throughout chapters. I'm dyslexic and it really stands out even too me! Get a beta for future stories.

How does this story have so many favorites?! The plot is typical and cliche at best, the grammar and spelling are so atrocious it is distracting (if you are old enough to write sec scenes, you should be old enough to know the difference between their/there/they're and to/too). Also, major laughs at PLACID instead of FLACCID. Use a beta and some more imagination next time, this is embarrassing

This was so beautiful. I cried twice on the last chapter because I thought he was dead but then it was revealed he wasn't. Bravo, you know how to write. Best of in future endeavors. ;)