| Reviews for Modern Warfare |
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   underlings chapter 1 . 3/7/2016 this was lovely! you got everyone's characterizations down perfectly |
| Donni chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Love it! Perfect, and really good characterizations to boot! |
| InfinityRabbit chapter 1 . 7/23/2015 This is totally plausible and these two are my eyeshield OTP. Loved this and hope to see some more great writing :) |
| TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 10/29/2014 The best "getting together" fic. |
| Kushina-san chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 a great one! |
| puregarnet chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 I love it! They are so in character! Nice! |
| mollycoddle chapter 1 . 7/17/2013 I will reread this again. And again. |
| Hermi-ko chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 Awesome reading, love the story behind the bomb and how Mamori deals with the pattern XD Do you mind if I translate this story into French? Congrats for such an epic fic! *Hermi-ko*** |
| Terikel chapter 1 . 5/1/2013 Hah, this is great. Amazing how well you go this two down, escpecially Hiruma. He's so screwed in the head, and Mamori still understands him great. xD I also like the analogy with the bomb. So true. xD |
| sleight chapter 1 . 4/12/2013 Analogy: great and relatable to Hiruma Characterization: accurate as Mamori will think Writing: flow, concise, easy to follow God this was great sometimes I read it in my free time bc it's so great |
| rexroy101 chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 That was incredibly witty, and brilliant! Perfect metaphors and great character reactions. Though I do feel like Mamori was just a "little" slow o the uptake, but I guess you would never expect a high schooler to deport people... |
| Ty chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 Oh geez. The way you write and the metaphors and the dissection of Hiruma's mind and motivations and Mamori's reactions and just ugh everything. I cant even express in words how great this piece is. Freakin' perfect. |
| Mei Vir D. Ripper chapter 1 . 7/23/2012 This story deserves a standing ovation in every word and description used on how Hiruma and Mamori's actual relationship works. I found myself utterly speechless - reading every step of the way - I felt lightheaded, thrilled, nauseous, all in one. Actually, I don't think I'm having that much sense in my review now. All I know is that, this deserves more than this shitty review and fave, I am about to give you. I should give you a good old death hug for this awesome fic! Regards, -MVDR- |
| Blaquestarr chapter 1 . 6/25/2012 Flawless... One of the best writers I've seen on ! |
| whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012 Awwww! Such a cute ending! :DDD This fic was so funny! Very analytical. xD Hiruma is a piece of work isn't he? I MISS READING EYESHIELD 21. Dx You should write moer of this pairing~ Your take on how the characters act is spot on. ;P |
