I really enjoyed this story! Very interesting storyline surrounding Arthur's coma.

LOVED IT. :)

I loved this story, this was a great sequel from your This is a gift, it comes with a price. I loved how your talked about their great memories and the dream.

Excellent chapter, Ariadne definitely is getting closer and closer to reconnecting with Arthur. Can't wait for more!

Wow, this is great, I keep thinking in my mind will she get him to remember this time? Hope you update soon.

Wonderful chapter, I look forward to more!

Yay, he sort of remembers. Hope you update soon.

Excellent chapter and very interesting new developments!

This is so sad, I love your writing though. Hope you update soon.

Enjoyed this chapter, can't wait for what's next!

Great chapter, can't wait for Arthur's dream that Ariadne is going into. Hope you update soon.

Great chapter. I'm so glad you made a sequel. I also noticed that your English is getting a lot better. Good job and keep it up.

Now, it makes one wonder if in that coma state, Arthur is in some kind of limbo. Maybe thats why he's not waking up, hence being in the dream business for so long and all the jobs, he's conformed his reality with his coma state. I think Ariadne's gonna have to be the one to wake him up going under the aid of the PASIV and did what Cobb did for Mal and really wake him up without distorting the true reality. Also, bringing up the past, nice touch to summarize a bit of their love, it makes one wonder if Arthur has a jealous streak of his own when Ariadne creations attract the various amounts of admirers such as a fellow architect like Cobb or even just the boldness and humorous Eames. I love that Ariadne has been the one person that he can be himself with and open up his true emotions and not hold back who he truly is inside especially being the point man. I cant wait to see what Ariadne unravels in Arthur's coma state.

Yes, a sequel to your lovely story. But already tragedy and drama begins. Poor Arthur and Ariadne. Totally feel for the two newly engaged couple. That's amazing how connected they are to each other when in danger. Ariadne's gut instinct telling her that Arthur was in some trouble. I gotta love Eames and his support of Ariadne. I wonder if he's bound to fall smitten to the architect, while Arthur is in this coma state of things. Anyhow, he really knows how to lighten the mood of things. Cant wait to see what happens. Already exciting.

Great chapter, I liked the flashback section and the contrast with the current dire situation.