Yay! I finally found something sweet about Jack and Sarah! And it's well written to boot! Why does everybody insist on writing slash?! Or if it is Jack/Sarah, it always seem to end sadly. Thank you for this :)

awww that was so cute! I LOVE Jack and this story was adorable.

many ppl. don't like the pairing Jack and Sarah I don't get it they're such a cute couple and so obviously in love.

good jobe!

its sweet and i don't get why everybody hates sarah jacobs I like her and jack toughter i think there a cute cople..

Anyways good jobe

ok, i know this is old-ish. i'm searching for Jack (for the main character of the movie, there are surprisingly very few stories where he's the main focus...) stories and it came up.

this was your first Newsies fic? it's GENIUS! You write Jack and his Santa Fe dream very well, in my opinion. And only seeing it a few days before you wrote this? that's true talent right there, getting inside the character's head like that.

and i like that you had Sarah in it. no one ever really writes about her much, but i think there are endless possibilities for her character.

*favorites*

:)

So cute. Adorable. I love it.

I got this update awhile ago (I love being subscribed to you), and knowing I'd watch Newsies sooner or later on all the recommendations, I saved it. I'm glad I did, because I saw it just a few minutes ago and this was great.

WOOT! Finally! Do you know how long it took me to find some good solid Jack/Sarah? *applauds*

And since I do love roasted marshmallows, and I know you do too...

THAT WAS HORRIBLE AND STUPID-WHY WOULD U EVA WRITE THAT?

There. I hope you have makings for S'mores. Those are good.

Once again, I loved it!

Awww, so cute! *sigh* I wish I had a fire escape that Jack Kelley could sleep on :)

Considering that I don't like Sarah, this is a really sweet, cute little story! I like it. :)

Welcome aboard the S.S. NEWSIE. Remeber, life boats are located... Who am I kidden? This fandom's unsinkable.

Davey, Skittery, and Racetrack are my favorites. Mush and Kid Blink are close seconds though. Then, there's Jack.

I like you're writing. keep it up~!

Aww, this is just darling. Absolute luvs. :)

~Paisley

Too sweet! I loved it! You did a great job capturing Jack and Sarah in such a short span. It gave me a serious case of the warm fuzzies... I just want to give Jacky Boy a giant hug :)

Keep it up,

MissT