I know this is an old story and I'm not even sure if you are still active or paying attention to these reviews but chapters 4 and 2 are the same and it would be great if you updated it so that both stories appear.

litera s

haha, amazing!

i loved all you snippets so far but i think this is one of my favs!

Dieses triumphale Gefühl es irgendwie schon gewusst zu haben, nur um dann bestätigt zu werden. Danke. Nicht zu vergessen die punktgenaue pointierte "Schockreaktion" der Anwesenden und die Resignation des "Protagonisten"(?). Dankeschön.

Hilarious!

Ah, love this chapter, please can you make a story out if this?

Soo... this lieutenant was one of the ones that steered the Executor into the Death Star after it's untimely meeting with an A-Wing?

I'm joking! Joking!

Nothing short of the Force itself could have stopped that particular impact.

Well Han you might be finding out exactly what you wondering since you end up falling in love with Vader's (unknown) daughter

I like the relationship between ranks in this story especially the fact that Veers and Piett and the others don't mind so of the jokes being at their expense (love Piett's blushing about the harems).

*special hug* indeed. Heh.

I don't know, I can actually see this as an amusing, but realistic, event. One that people would never bring up in Vader's hearing, of course.

I never really thought about the way Ships pick up Nicknames, but now I will forever call the Executor 'Cutie' !

The storyline definitely matches the sentence, I can easily picture that image.

AHHHH HOW DID I MISS BEFORE THAT IT WAS PIETT!