A very interesting interpretation of Rilian's thoughts while enchanted - it feels like a very accurately Narnian outlook.

Aw! That's gorgeous. I hope that is exactly how it went. And since it's Narnia, in my brain, now, that is what happened.

Aw! That's gorgeous. I hope that is exactly how it went. And since it's Narnia, in my brain, now, that is what happened.

Aw! That's gorgeous. I hope that is exactly how it went. And since it's Narnia, in my brain, now, that is what happened.

I love this story! It was so beautiful and brilliant! You captured the feelings and emotions that I love so much in The Silver Chair. You especially captured Rilian's character. Very, VERY well done!

~God Bless~

*bip*

Thy story hath been added to my community. And faved, but you knew that.

It's gorgeous. *sigh* More people ought to write about Rilian.

I liked it. Very emotional and poetic. The beginning is wonderful and I think you capture his horror, despair, and ultimately hope perfectly.

This is beautiful in every detail. What an inspired idea, to show the events of The Silver Chair from Rilian's point of view. That moment when he first encounters the children and Puddleglum is especially gripping. I'm so pleased that you showed the reunion between him and Caspian, as well. I love your idea of what Caspian would have said. The ending is just right, with Puddleglum as Rilian's chief advisor...and of course the Christmas tree. I know that this story is a gift-fic for a specific person, but I think it's a gift for all readers who love Narnia. Thank you for a lovely Christmas tale.

Great story. Thanks for writing, x