more please!

I like it. Funny. Also dramatic:) I say keep writing:D

I am loving Mrs. Noin!

This was good! Duo cracks me up. :D

Amazing. I love what you've done with this story. Heero's little explanation for Relena's weight was hilarious.

Dang! Is this a Korean drama or what! LMFAO! Shit are hitting the fan. Lol keep up.

Dang! Is this a Korean drama or what! LMFAO! Shit are hitting the fan. Lol keep up.

Me likey! You guys really cover a lot of ' what-Ifs'!

Wow! I love akitas!

Good job on your latest work. You're building the story very well so far. :D

LOL. These have been very amusing chapters so far.

The funniest line I've seen so far - "Not this braided fool, I hope?"

Priceless. :D

So...Zechs is in the proverbial dog house, Noin's mother just freaked out, Heero is STILL saying he's going to kill Relena (though we all know that probably won't happen), Relena is learning about firearms, Duo is possibly in the doghouse, and Quatra is apparently disliked by Noin's mother. Wow. Relena just opened the door and said: "Welcome Chaos, make yourself at home. May Pegan take your coat?"

Very interesting story...Besides Heero and Relena, Duo has always been my favorite character. That portrayal of him was great! I'm excited to see where this goes...

This is really good! I like that you have multiple storylines going-like the tension between Zechs and Quatre, the altered blueprints, Ein, and the rest. Your dialogue is good, too, and you're doing well at keeping everyone in character.

I do want to point out one tiny thing, though: you switch between Preventor and Preventer a few times. It isn't a big deal; I just happened to notice and thought I'd let you know.

So nice to see this updated, these new revisions are going great, i cant wait to read what happens next, keep the updates coming!

Good story so far! Please continue writing!