I loved this story! This chapter was sappy and the whole time I was thinking where's Hope and Aiden? But I love the story!

Sorry I didn't log in I'm on my IPod! Anyways, let's see what happens!

damn...so Daniel starts abusing riley after all...and of course Zander comes home only to find that his old friend is the culprit. you're really good at mindfing people, sweetheart.

damn this Zander is one smooth SOB. his friend's cool, but that redhead he's talking about...does he mean Riley?

wow. so Zander's a carrier of the same virus that techincally almost killed James. this is getting interesting.

huh...so that's how Zander meets the guy the sires James in the first chapter.

wow...kills her during sex, atypical vampire behavior. but how the hewll deosn't he get caught? oh wait, it's a story.

kills his parents right off the bat? and then tries to hook up after living on his own? dude is screwed up big time.

this is really different compared to your old writing stlye. i like it.

that's a really good song. this makes more sense after you'd been wondering just why Daniel kept stalking her before James changes her into a vampire a such.

Breaking Dane much? her thoughts after she blacked up just seems like Bella's when she's transforming...but the whole chapter was written well, detailwise anyways.

and of course her cravings for sweets start to kick in. so what does he do? punishes her by having sex when her. Talk about re-inforcing bad behavoir. wouldn't that be rewarding it?

Riley is seriously thinking about drinking when she's pregnant? where's Logan to lecture her when you need him?

Of course James faints. typical. I think I've actaully heard about that diamond before. They say it's cursed, right? that like everyone associated with it dies or something...

Then their lips meet. It's more everything...more sensual, now that his baby is within her, more meaningful, that she knows he won't give her up without a fight...- that's the best line in the chapter. i love how she's hinting she might faint during the ultrasound. but she's nervous, i don't blame her.