Reviews for Lucky 13 |
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oofthatsawrap chapter 2 . 7/4/2017 WHAT HAKU WHAT NEJI AND TENTEN MET WHAT SUI AND SHIKA INTERACTING WHAT KISABAE DEIDEI AND 'TACHI-KUN WHAT |
sleight chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Oho Look at all these characters And meetings This is so exciting Ily |
sleight chapter 1 . 7/13/2013 oh my god this plot is fantastic. I'm actually so awed. This is amazing. I really enjoy the "super powers" though that doesn't really do it justice... But yeah. This is great, wondrous, etc. my heart is excited |
WarriorQueen124 chapter 2 . 7/13/2013 Wow, I loved it so far! I like how you portray them, they're different and it's interesting. Great job and keep writing! :) |
straw8erries chapter 2 . 7/31/2012 tenten is just adorable. really. i love her already. she makes me giggle. the plot you have is rather interesting. i'm looking toward an update! |
sumenaa chapter 2 . 4/14/2012 so I'm reading your stuff, one by one, like I promised. D all I can say is I really, really regret not reading this sooner ;3; hope you update soon! |
invisibly inked chapter 2 . 2/21/2012 oh-em-gee please continue this. it's too good just to leave it like that. |
Sn chapter 2 . 10/14/2011 Ohhohohoh! I reaaaaally reaaaaaally like this! Actually I like all your stories (specially masquerade) and this one's really cool! I like the writing style Lol so funny! I hope you update soon! -sadisticnightmare |
Mishirure chapter 2 . 8/19/2011 Kiba and Sasuke made my life. XD |
starbottle chapter 2 . 7/23/2011 I adore this. Very much, actually. Your way with words is just flawless. I'd love to be able to write like you do; you just describe everything perfectly, without rambling on and on and on, which is something that a lot of writers, me inclusive, can't do. This is the one first stories I've read on this site, and I'm very glad I stumbled upon it. You're extraordinarily talented, and I hope that I can be as good as you one day. 'v' Amazing job, keep up the good work. /goes to stalk your other stories. ;D |
oh shoot. the pi review chapter 2 . 5/31/2011 I meant to do that under my account, as seleneswan. oh well. . |
prismatically inked chapter 2 . 5/31/2011 best line EVER: "No, Kisame — the reason I don't want to swim is because the last time I went swimming with you, you savagely attacked a small child in a rubber dingy." LOLOLOL I WAS LAUGHING SO MUCH. x) pretty boy sasuke. :D and, can I just say I'm loving shino? he seems really cool. I'm really liking hinata, too. so soft and just...people-watching, all the time. she's sweet. and soft. like...like cotton candy. oh, sakura, ever the voice of reason among naruto's antics. (: also, orochimaru introduction! dun dun dunnn. I AM LOVING THIS. :D LOVING IT TO PIECES, BRIONY. TO. PIECES. |
windsilk chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 HOW HAVE I NOT READ THIS UNTIL JUST NOW, BRIONY? HOW. HOWWWWWWWWWW. THIS EMBODIES GREATNESS. NO, NO. THIS IS GREATNESS. ASJHKDFSD. FLAILING NOW. :D ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
AMU chapter 2 . 5/25/2011 I love how you use every character it's very awesome!But special request can you add Hinata more! PLEASE I LOVE HER ! Anyways great chapter please get more out! Thanks :) |
AMU chapter 1 . 5/25/2011 OMG! This was awesome I love all the characters good job! |