This was so realistic. I appreciate that.

Vanessa huh? Which would mean Jacob is probably Seth's dad. So Jacob is out. Gotta be Riley then.

Now that you've introduced Jacob, I think it's Jacob.

It's probably Riley

Bella just described someone she just met as "disgustingly-skinny"? That's so rude and judgemental. How does she know that girl doesn't have an eating disorder or something? So unkind of her! Now, that's disgusting.

Renee and Charlie are brothers and sisters? Edward has blue eyes? Why are you doing this!?

go fuck yourself Edward...haven't you left bella enough...walk away bella you can do better!

he totally left her for emma didn't her? so he was involved with this emma emotionally while he was still with bella...and this is the hoe he brought home ...and you have bella back with this piece of shit? noooooooo

I cant believe bella said she wanted it then after freaked out like she was fucking raped raped or something...hitting him and crying and shit HOW FUCKING EMBARRASSING

how can she not be mad at Edward...just months after he broke her heart he was involved with a girl so much so that he fucking BROUGHT HER HOME WITH HIM...so I'm guessing theyd been together for awhile...whore..
I fucking HATE manwhores...
I cant read this shit anymore...bella gets fucked over and over and over again...and what does Edward get? pussy, pussy and more pussy. and what she couldn't have him when she wanted him...but like I said she can have him NOW? NOW that hes all used the fuck up ? and with fucking kids too? no thanks

how many years after bella did he fuck his friend and get her fucking pregnant? whats with [people marrying cause they got someone pregnant anyway? stuuuuuuuuupid if he decided to marry someone then he must not have loved bella...

so something happens and assward hurts bella then starts fucking the friend he supposedly didn't like and married the hoe and they have kids...like plural...so bella has been hurt...then she marries some dude...gets hurt again...and NOW she can have Edward...but only now that he has a fuckload of baggage and his dicks all dirty?
FUCK THAT

Edward is a selfish coward. He broke up with Bella because he anted to have sex with Emma. She is the girl he brought back for spring break isn't she? And Edward could have chased Bella. He knew Charlie knew where Bella lived, but he chose to ignore her for an easy lay. And how can that idiot not realize that Rachel has been in love with him for a long time? She stalked him when he was with Bella, and followed him to school.
I don't doubt she faked a pregnancy to trap Edward. James himself says his sister is psycho. Rachel says horrible things to Bella, and says them in front of her children, and yet Edward says she is a good person?! Bullshit. Why is it he got to have a great life but Bella was shafted?

You left Bella without friends, a job or a home, even Seth's social worker says this. But Edward has a home a job and kids. Why? It was all his fault they broke up so long ago, but Bella is the one who suffered. Why couldn't you at least let her have a biological child of her own? Why did you make her suffer, and yet rewarded Edward and Rachel? Hell even Riley has a kid now.

What's worse, Edward left Bella once again because of Rachel's words, which we never know about, and instead of leaving as she should have, Bella becomes his doormat.

And you never addressed Charlie almost losing the farm. The ending was too abrupt, and this story sucked. It is a shame that so many young girls read this and thin this is a love story. It is not. The only love story here is Edward's narcissistic love. As long as he was happy, the hell with Bella.

I'm loving this so far! I actually live a mile from Cleveland School Road!

Such a cool story! It was so sad at times but had wonderful characters and a great story line. I hated to see this one end. Thank you.