This story is goals!

More story please I need to know what happens next please

I did like the story and there were parts that I really loved. But you made Haruhi sound like a total push over and that annoyed me, I couldn't get past the fact that she didn't argue like Haruhi would. Sorry I don't mean to be negative but I was pushed away because of that fact.
Other then that I really enjoyed your writing and imagination that created an atmosphere with great detail. So you could see the scene like you're standing in the story. Well done on that end.

OMFG I FOUND IT! I read this fic years ago and ahh I finally found it again :'3

Aww This is such a cute story. Though I am a little surprised you haven't written a little more intimacy between Kyouya and Haruhi. He is a teenage boy with raging hormones after all and as gentlemanly as he was raised, I'm sure even he can't control the urges to progress in their physical relationship. Even so, its still very cute and I hope you update soon!

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this is so cute! he's opening up and I just ahhhhhhthisissoamazingandican'tevenbelievehewascap ableofsuchsweetnessahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

This is a really engaging story. When you find the time to update I will enjoy reading the next installment. :)

Again good sir

I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see where it leads.

I really like this story please update

I love this story, Break a leg with your show. . .even if it has past. . . please continue

you really should write more soon! i love love love LOVE this. it has seriously had me in tears... so pretty please?

I'm glad you are going to pick up on this story again. You are a great writer, and I can't wait to see an update:)

Yes! That's the freaking shadow king. He knows Haruhi is only his:)