This was excellent. I love that you didn't overdo it with the details of the environment in the flashback, instead focusing on what's going on. Excellent job. Alo, as usual, you stayed IC with how remorseful Zuko was in S3 for his brazen behavior earlier. Your use of italic and dialogue was excellent.

Wow. I really liked this. No I LOVED this. I feel the song What Have You Done by Within Temptation fits this, But that might just be me.

I think you did a really good job on this. I always felt that the writers kind of left out the fact that, at some point, Zuko and Azula must've had a normal sibling relationship.

Wow, great work. This is a better way for the series to end. Much more emotion than in the series. Too bad Azula had to died though.

this story is so sad, but good. i almost cried multiple times throughout the story, but i mean that in a good way. it really puts zuko and azula in a different light.

btw: can you please update on No Turning Back Now? I love that story!

Wow, this was pretty sad. I'm trying to put my finger on what more you could have done. But I know with some practice you could redo this and make it tear-jerk try and put some more emotion into Zuko's thoughts of his baby sister through ought those memories. You tend to focus more on what the charachter is saying rather than thinking. I've read your story No Turning Back Now and know that you tend to use more third person. Try doing some more first person one-shots if you want to improve in this area. You don't have to post them, but it would be great practice. And if you love third person more, then keep on doing that.

Wow, longest review I have ever made...

Good Luck!

This is REALLY GOOD!