| Reviews for She's Mine |
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   Spock77 chapter 1 . 4/20 Great story keep up the good work |
| Koriander.K chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 awesome shit :D keep diz up m8 |
| NonOmnisMoriar chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 That was fantastic! Never back down when you're fighting for your loved ones. Thanks for sharing. NOM |
| guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 Sheperd 1 mido 0 :-D |
| aceofqueens chapter 1 . 11/1/2013 You referred to Veetor as she. Veetor is he. Thought I should let you know. Nice little story though. I've seen so many stories where the Quarians are depicted as judgmental and xenophobic towards humans. Stories where Manshep gets shit for his thing with Tali. It's totally unwarranted and ironic, considering the Galaxy's stereotypes about quarians. It just makes no sense. It's like writers hate quarians. So I'm glad you didn't disrespect them. I'm also glad you showed Shepard being a badass. I've seen some stories where he is essentially a whimp and really defensive about his relationship with Tali. I always thought he'd be more like "oh, you got a problem with this?" like how you depict it. |
| Paragon the Half-Dragon chapter 1 . 8/12/2012 I LOVE how the antagonist's name is Mido... reminds me of that faggot from Ocarina of Time. As good as this story is I wish Shep had roughed the little prick up. |
| BloodRaven55 chapter 1 . 5/2/2012 Good story, the piss on you thing was going a bit too far but it's good nonetheless. Also, try and avoid having adult characters saying pervert, adults would never say it in real life. Keep up the good stories :) |
| Arkatex chapter 1 . 3/9/2012 Is it weird that when I read this story, I think of Link, Saria, and Mido from Legend Of Zelda |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2011 The only thing missing was a Conrad Verner moment. |
| Zanegar chapter 1 . 6/7/2011 World that be paragon or renegade? Oh well. (P.S. This is not a trap.) |
| Archan9el S117 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011 LMAOH. Way to go Serguis. |
| S3eK chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 Nice work... Never thought of that admiral that way, but he did do a lot of nodding-like motions in the trial. On a side note, where did you get your profile pic? Keep up the good work, Seek |
| Silent Archangel chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 Shepard's determination will never waver will it? Especially when it comes to Tali. I hope a greater romance can be pursued in Mass Effect 3. - You displayed Shepard's emotions very well, and I enjoyed the argument between him and the other Quarian. |
| SheenWinning chapter 1 . 1/20/2011 This is a good story, there are some things however that are minor. 1. using words like perv, doesnt seem like Shepard would really say that doesnt it? 2. I kind of agree that the story is going a little bit overboard, they don't play a huge role on effecting the story but still great writing i hope to see more stories out of you soon |
| Grizzly2O chapter 1 . 1/13/2011 AWESOME. please continue |
