| Reviews for The forbidden |
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   InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 9 . 5/8/2011 Lolz XD Loved this chapter :3 Random Miroku at the end XD too perfect :) |
| Destery The Ice Alchemist chapter 9 . 5/8/2011 AHHHH! I love itttttt! More more more! lololololol -_- |
| Lucy The Lightless chapter 8 . 4/29/2011 Pretty good. You seem to be learning. I just reccomened re-reading your chapters before you post them to work out any kinks. Also keep an eye on grammer. People will take you more seriously is you do that. Other than that, Good job staying in character! Most fanfics like this botch the characters. I'm proud of you. Keep it up. -Lucy |
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 8 . 4/26/2011 Beautiful chapter! update soon :3 |
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 7 . 4/26/2011 I under stood this chapter after just reading it once XD |
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 6 . 4/26/2011 Love how Ed and Winry go from nearly having sex to actin like everythin is normal XD |
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 3 . 4/26/2011 Amazing chapter! |
| Destery The Ice Alchemist chapter 8 . 4/26/2011 OHMYGAWD! SO ROMANTIC! You gotta keep writing! :D It's super good! I LOOOOVE IT! :D :D :D |
| notavaiable-moved chapter 7 . 2/11/2011 CUTEE and I'm dieing to see the next chapter and I get it anyway PLEASE PLEASE WITH A ED AND WINRY KISSING PLUSHIE ON TOP[i don't know if there is one though but please] |
| notavaiable-moved chapter 6 . 2/7/2011 this is so good! mainly because i really like edwin there are totally thrist for eachother |
| notavaiable-moved chapter 5 . 2/7/2011 AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH its so adorable i cant help love it |
| notavaiable-moved chapter 1 . 2/7/2011 good for you i really really like hehehe GO EDWIN or EDWARD X WINRY |
| InuNaruPokeAlchemist chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 Really liked this story. |
