| Reviews for The Lone Wolverine And His Moon |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 12/19/2013 I love this story, it's definitely a unique storyline! Please continue writing and update! |
 BlackBeari chapter 2 . 10/5/2013 so nice what happens next. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/28/2013 Next up. Victor an Logan. |
| JiYong Kwon chapter 4 . 8/16/2013 Love It |
| BaconBabe chapter 4 . 8/16/2013 it' nice to see you updated |
| poisedrose chapter 3 . 4/27/2011 I love this story please update! :D |
| BaconBabe chapter 3 . 2/16/2011 I can't wait to read what happens next. plz update |
| x XRoweenaJAugustineX x chapter 3 . 1/8/2011 I can just picture Isabelle, as that little girl 'Boo' from Monsters Inc. really cute and curious. I love her powers. fantastic great chapter! udpate soon D |
| Rocky181 chapter 3 . 1/7/2011 A great start I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| i.want.freedom chapter 3 . 1/6/2011 update soon |
| x XRoweenaJAugustineX x chapter 2 . 1/4/2011 aw, I wanted to read more.. . update soon, cuz it's an interesting story. ;D |
| i.want.freedom chapter 2 . 12/30/2010 Great chapter...can't wait to see what happens next |
| jestervalaia chapter 2 . 12/30/2010 I do think there's great potential, however there are a couple of things that I think need pointing out purely to improve your writing. First off, the grammar isn't quite there in places. E.G. "The only companion with her were the shining sprinkling stars and the glowing pale full moon" should read a little more like "The only companions with her were the shining, sprinkling stars and the glowing, pale, full moon" Also - you repeat words a lot which can generally kill the flow. If you're not sure, try using an online thesaurus to look up alternatives. In the summary note at the top of the chapter, you spell her name Isabel, but at the end it's Isabelle. That one is purely consistency. |
