| Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces |
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lisaisfire619 chapter 67 . 4/5 loved it |
CrystalAris chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 ...I will die if she bursts through that door and points at ‘him’ shouting “Steve!” |
CrystalAris chapter 2 . 9/19/2019 Female, sadly. I don’t have 5be family jewels |
LiteraryWitch chapter 35 . 9/19/2019 I could read this story so many times and it would never get old. Every girl deserves her own personal Takashi. |
AnimeBunnyLover chapter 11 . 4/9/2019 the song is from Fruits Basket and it's Momiji's song from the hot spring episode |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/22/2018 An Apple away keeps the doctor away. You wanna know how to keep hosts away? Let me tell you my favourite saying! An Apple a day keeps anyone away! If you throw it hard enough! |
UltimateReading chapter 31 . 9/17/2017 i think the zoo! |
LiteraryWitch chapter 54 . 5/25/2017 Sammy's a Ravenclaw? So am I! |
Tisha chapter 1 . 8/26/2016 This story is certainly different. I appreciate the effort the author puts in yet the constant movie and song references has failed to keep my interest. I found the story to loose cohesion and the excessive movie and anime quotes distracting and became more of an impediment to actually saying what was happening. Due to this I must say I found myself unable to finish reading. I wish the author the very best and hope that they continue on the journey of creative writing. |
kufq2akzenblihopLK chapter 67 . 5/26/2016 Woah WOAH! THAT Sohma Yuki?! The one from Fruit's Basket? *faints* I can't BELIEVE this is the end! 67 chapters T.T My thoughts: LOVED IT. Not only do all the references you've made (some flew over my head, I'll admit) make me grin or sing-a-long when Sammy says/thinks of them, you did not rush to end the story like many do (myself included *shot*) and this gave time for the character development, not only for Sammy alone, but for all the other's as well. Having Kotoko end up with Honey was a bit of a surprise for me but Honey having an 'evil'/mischevious side to him was even more surprising. No doubt we've seen his darker side and intelligence displayed in the anime/manga, still, you gave him your own twist and quite honestly, I'd never want to get on his bad side... or really any of the host's bad side lol (just remembered when Morinozuka snapped and banged the table when Sammy refused to eat the seafood *shudders*). With how Sammy usually acts, I never would have thought that she had depression and later, after you revealed to us the reason why, I really can't believe it, or imagine what it must have been like for her. But I'm so glad that she found a family in the host club that she wanted to have nothing to do with. That they helped one another in difficult times, and that she found her love. So sweet! Also, that her family was there for her big day was extremely moving. And now, you've got me WAY to excited for Angel and the story that's about to unfold LOL Thank you, thank you for this wondeful story! I'm adding it to my favs :) All the best in your future stories! |
Guest chapter 67 . 3/23/2016 OK BUT YUKI SOHMA? YOU EXPECT ME NOT TO NOTICE THAT? |
Sarah Mitchells chapter 1 . 3/10/2016 This chapter was pretty good, but as a gentle correction; using the word "retarded" to describe a probably foolish grin is offensive. |
LiteraryWitch chapter 44 . 2/11/2016 Why does Takashi call Sammy "Koi?" |
Jessi.DarkFox chapter 67 . 1/18/2016 This was wonderful and adorable. Excellent work and good job for finishing it! :D |
QueenOfDespair1118 chapter 67 . 1/18/2016 That was a awesome ending to a fantastic story! I had fallen behind on your updates, and just finished catching up. This story is definitely worthy to be in my favorites! Keep up the great writing! |