| Reviews for Moksha |
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Dovahcrap chapter 1 . 7/1 That was a really entertaining read and I absolutely had a great time reading it. It's a well-written story of dealing with a traumatic and horrible past, and moving forward. The story started light, and from there slowly became heavier. It has enough of the seriousness, humor and finally a little bit of romance at the end for it to be a really interesting and enjoyable story. Though really, it was your brilliant decision of adding Henry the Thestral that made this story really an enjoyable one. I also enjoyed the dialogue between Harry and Luna. You only gave enough information about their post-Hogwarts lives. A lot of stories similar to this gives too much information, which in my opinion is unnecessary as it derails the flow of the story. So I'm glad that the story wasn't anything like that. I don't have anything else to say about Harry and Luna other than that they hold a special place in my heart. I simply love the pair and I'm really happy that I got to read an interesting and well-written story with them as the main characters. So thank you for writing and sharing an amazing and entertaining story with us. I hope you're doing well, and I wish you the best. Stay safe and healthy. I'm also extremely grateful that you have listed quite a lot of stories in your favorites while I was checking your profile. I agree with the points you've made regarding JK Rowling's decisions and treatment of the Harry Potter series. I don't particularly hate the epilogue but I do believe that you're right with your point. There's still so much more to explore in the universe Rowling created. Rowling did write a sequel and prequels, and regardless of how others feel about them, I believe that they could have been better and satisfying if she didn't do what she did. |
Hank1967 chapter 1 . 12/29/2018 Very cute story! Loved it! |
ironhair chapter 1 . 5/6/2018 Hmm |
Light on the Horizon chapter 1 . 5/29/2015 Great story! |
Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 3/15/2015 Thanks for the story. I liked Luna's crazy plan. Dursleys' hoyse is just an icing on the cake. |
Andrius chapter 1 . 11/2/2013 This was quite fun, although I don't think Dursley-evil is quite on the level of Malfoy-evil, so IMHO they don't deserve to get their house blown up (and potentially die). |
noylj chapter 1 . 8/8/2013 Nice story. I hope the Malfoys were home with a whole lot of their friends. |
Nemrut chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 Not sure I love your Luna but it was nonetheless a very well written piece, thank you for sharing. |
Meteoricshipyards chapter 1 . 12/20/2012 Very enjoyable. I like the idea of blowing up Malfoy's place. The Durley's house was just icing on the cake. Good story. Nice interaction between Harry, Luna, and Henry. Thanks for writing it. Tom A. Shut up Henry. |
CheddarTrek chapter 1 . 8/25/2012 Haha, gotta love Luna. |
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 4/19/2012 That was an entertaining-enough read; thanks. ~-~-~-~ ›› I suggest you never, ever let Daddy know that you've managed to find that wand; he might forget to keep it a secret and print it in The Quibbler. Then you'd have everyone challenging you to duels Ayeah... That would be a good plan and all, except that Voldemort already told the whole world that the wand, that they watched Harry take, was the Elder wand. It was not secret at all. ›› Harry still had a hard time getting his head round the possibility that he'd just snuffed them (The Malfoys) all out. Screw that. Harry and Luna just murderded 2 heathy adults of what must surely be some of the last of their kind. |
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 1 . 2/21/2012 This story would be a lot more successful with an adequate title and summary. You really need to be in the mood for a bit of revenge or catharsis in order to appreciate this piece, and the title and summary simply don't give you a clue. |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 2/12/2012 What a funny story and as always, Luna shocks and amazes! Thanks for sharing! |
Luan Mao chapter 1 . 11/10/2011 This story is well-written and well-thought-out and such, but I didn't really care for it. I'm not sure why; maybe just the mood I'm in. So let's discount that and go with logic, which says: Good story! The main theme, of needing to resolve unsatisfied grievances from the war, is a strong one, and one that not many address. (Harry's grievance from his childhood, too, as long as we're addressing it and blowing up houses and stuff.) And if officialdom wasn't going to punish the wrongdoers, then it was up to the victims. You also made a really good point about memory charms and Luna not knowing what had happened to her, which led nicely to the nearly-obligatory Harry-n-Luna knockin' boots ending. Cute bit with Henry taunting Harry. And finally, I'm adding this to my favorites (even though I didn't really care for it) because it's ridiculous that a story as well-written as this has only twelve reviews after eleven months when illiterate, sophomoric crap has hundreds. Regards, LM |
Karthaugh chapter 1 . 10/4/2011 Great story! simply not enough harry/luna in this site, and certainly not as well written! good job |