YOU KNOW PART OF THE REASON LUCY DIED WAS BECAUSE OF THE BLEEDING EFFECT

Lucy's death killed me inside

Lucy's death killed the replay value of the whole series...

Great chapter. :)

the end did kinda change the game X) he went into a coma. You probably know that by now though.

OMG! This story was really good! It made me cry all over again since I saw her die when I played. I still refuse to believe it. I cried for about 1 hour. (I'm such a nerd) thank you. I deeply appreciate this. YOUR AMAZING!

The ending messed me up. I staired at the screen unmoving when I relized lucy was going to die until the credits were completely over.

This fix pretty uch sums up my emotions on the hole ordeal. '(

LUCY IS NOT DEAD! I find it heartening that I was not the only player to have a bitch fit at the end of AC:B. Man, I we could have all taped our reactions and then put it all in a fanvid on youtube... epic! LOL

Sorry, rambling, this was awesome, you a truly amazing at capturing emotion onto the page. You NEED to do some work on Altair; the ubisoft writer's really could have worked a little harder on his personality... I'll bet you come up with something EPIC!

Very, very good one shot. Like some of your reviewers said you did a good job capturing the characters. I too am hoping that Lucy isn't dead, but if she was I'd hope she'd at least get a 'rest in peace'. We won't know until much later though I guess. I'm still having a hard time processing her death; mainly because I just finished the game yesterday (bought it real late).

Desmond's right though. Lucy would want him to keep on fighitng and keep on fighting he shall. Keep up the good work.

Ending of Brotherhood was f*cking stupid. But this is a really good interpretation of the scene, great job.

By the way, all they said during the credits was:

"Quick, put him back in the Animus!"

"OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD I DON'T KNOW WHAT THE HELL I'M DOING!"

"... Quick, put him back in the Animus!"

"OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD OKAY!"

I reject your reality and substitute it with my own... Lucy is naht dead. BTW good storey, well written, and excellent work on capturing the characters.

Anyway, anyone notice Ubisot is becoming more daring with the Assassin's Creed games. AC1, little swearing. No sexual references (except for that Lucy glitch. AC2 moderate swearing, begining of a sex scene. ACBH, more swearing, sex scene, incest and BAM! Lucy's death,.

The ending was crazy! It killed me and confused me! If someone hasn't told you yet in the credits here is the convo over all I may have worded things differently because I can't remember it perfectly but it went like this: "He is going into shock!" "Put him back in the animus!" "No, that's what caused this!"

wow this is amazing you captured the characters so well but remember to tell desmond no one really dead unless we forget about them

...Wow... Emotional...

First and foremost, THANK YOU for writing this. You see, when AC2 ended, I just kept staring at my TV with the controller in my hands muttering "holy shit" and then replayed the game two times just to get the feeling of witnessing utter epicness again.

When AC:BH ended, I kept screaming "NOOOOO! FRENCH B# %~ !S!" at my baffled mom making dinner in the same room, and ate a partially frozen cake in about 20 seconds during the credit roll out of pure rage, which is why I at least still got to hear the voices. There's nothing really important, though, only gives birth to a theory of an "animus inside an animus", which I don't like at all. Seventy-two my ass. I will never touch BH again. French bbb...

So then, after I'd breathed fire for a few hours, I went to sleep. At 11PM, I woke up, and immediately started thinking about it again, got super mad, couldn't fall asleep again, and here I am, desperately looking for post-BH fics.

While there are not many potential answers in your fic, it's obvious you poured your heart into it, and I can feel those emotions when reading it - especially since I'm so darn angry. I just... I just really hope this doesn't happen. ;_; She has to be alive... Then again a freaking god did it and it sounded pretty final. -sighs- Better not think about it anymore.

Where was I... right, good fic, good fic. Sent from the heavens at the moment, I tell you. But she's not dead! /denial

Oh, one thing though. It doesn't seem quite right when Desmond says "Requiescat in pace" when he's not Italian. But I understand that after all this time with Ezio, he's probably grasped some of it.