Perfect. Caine was so in character.

Aw! I'm in tears! That is so cute...you might wanna add 'romance' to the genres though! Lovely twist.

welcome to my fave stories

That was good. Unbelievably good. You pulled in really strong emotions and got it all perfectly. Keep writing. Because that was amazing.

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Okay, this story is seriously really good,and I usually don't like short stories. When I saw your username I was thinking Eli from degrassi, he's my favorite. And gone does need more credit, Caine Diana fan from the beginning, that's why I like you and your stories, same kind of taste you know? Well keep writing and I'll be sure to sure to read your stories! Glad someone else shares my taste in characters. When I was done hunger I seriously went back to read all the Caine Diana parts again before reading lies haha, well keepwriting stories, I enjoy them

Excellent job, I think you captured Caine's personality very well.

That was...

Wow.

Just... I don't have the words.

Amazing, beautiful, powerful...

It was brilliant, and going straight to my favourites. Perfectly in character, brilliantly written, I can't fault it. Wonderful.

Wow, I actually almost cried reading this. That was exquisitely done. Perfectly in tune to the characters, and I loved how Astrid was in there. Great, totally great.