I like this story a lot so far. My only problem is that the narration changes between past and present tense. I prefer to read stories written past tense, but as long as it is consistent it's fine.

Please keep updating!

This Arthur/Adriane story seems to be taking way too long to unfold. You need to move a little bit faster, I think. You might want to cut out the babble and get to the main point of the story. Otherwise, I love the first chapter though.

Absolutely wonderful! You've captured each of these characters perfectly! I can't wait to see who the knew extractor is!

Oooooh, great chapter. Hope you update soon.

more please... :O)

Hello again! Only just caught up with the story, been real busy lately! Not gonna lie, I did a crazy little happy dance when you mentioned me in your EM, needless to say it was a rather proud moment :') I know what it's like to just have a really rough day so I'm glad I managed to cheer you up in some way :D Anyhoo, I'm really enjoying the new development, interested to see where it goes. Naaaaw Ariadne, the poor love... those nightmares sound pretty horrific! And OMG I actually LOVE your Eames haha, could totally picture him too! Once again, characterisation is brill! It seems I have a thing for smooth talking gentlemen, especially those wearing three piece suits... ;) Keep it going, it's awesome! :D x

Great chapter, this Calipso charater has me intrigued.

Very interesting start to the story, I definitely see a lot of great potential!

Good chapter. Thank you for updating so quickly, the length of this was fine.

-I think we'll all be fine with the change as long as you make this "calipso" character believable, which means they cant be too over the top or under the top. Including an OC especially with such a big role like this will be very hard but I think you're up to the challenge.

-I'm a bit apprehensive to see how Ariadne reacts to this. Don't make her too excited like so many authors seem to do. She should be excited (but controlled), wary (but trusting), and a merge between curious and clueless (because she hasn't done this before- she's never done extraction, everyone seems to forget that- she should ask questions like "is that a problem? Or why are we doing that?)

Looking forward to your next update :)

I loved reading this chapter. Hope you update soon.

i love the story,update soon.

Love it, so please update soon!

I like cliffhangers too :). Chapter three chapter three!

That was great :D you're a really good writer.

Well done, I'm hoping to see more of this story in the future :)) *thumbs up!*