THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! YOUR STORY IS VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL AND I LIKE HOW YOU MAE BEAUTIFUL WORDS TO DESCRIBE THINGS. I LIE HOW YOU PAY ATTENTION TO SMALL DETAILS AND MAKE YOUR WORDS WORK O THOSE DETAILS! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! THE FIRST TIME I READ THE SUMMARY I WAS IMMEDIATELY SWOONED! I "AWWWW' THE MOMENT I READ THE SYNOPSIS AND I HAVENT EVEN STARTED YET! I WAS TERRIBLY ENJOYING MY HEARTS OFF WHILE I WAS READING. IT WAS SOOO FULL OF FLUFF BUT MATURE AT THE SAME TIME WITH ENOUGH LEMON AND ALL. ITS BEAUTIFUL! I HAVE BEEN SEARCHING FAR AND WIDE FOR AWESOME WRITERS HERE IN SINCE I WAS SO HEAD OVER HEELS WITH TANGLED AND BOTH RAPUNZEL AND EUGENE AND I TELL YOU THAT YOU GAVE JUSTICE TO THEM BOTH! YOU PORTRAYAL OF THEM WAS ON POINT! I LOVE IT AND THANK YOU THANKYOU! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THIS INTO SERIES THIS IS SUCH BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN I LOVE YOU!

Very sweet

SQUEALLL! My heart could burst with love and excitement over this funny, adorable piece 3

its sweet

Great one shot, absolutely adored it! Thanks for sharing your talent!

Awww! That was incredebly sweet!

Lol this is definetly how Flynn should have proposed... Totally :3

nnghsjakdne I love you.

cute story :)

Lovely!

Can't wipe the smile off my face now. This was funny. :-)

This is so cute and funny! You had me laughing out loud! :) I love your ideas and creativity. Good job!

Brilliant premise, very well executed! Plus just plain adorable :) And...*drumroll* you kept them in character! His proposals were hilarious, and just kept getting better. And I like the idea of her letting a lantern go for Gothel, it seems like something she'd actually do in the movie. Wonderful writing!

Oh so lovely! This is perfect!

I do believe I have spotted a Megamind reference :D

I very much enjoyed this little story :)