This is just... amazing.

Your overall word choice and grammar are both impeccable; your plot line is interesting, and relatively twisted. I like horror, but I must say that you have some of the most impressive horror I have read on FanFiction. Like, ever.

Wonderful job; I can't wait to read more of your FanFiction posts in the future.

Looking forward to it;

-Basse

Creepy disturbing and above all perfect I lOved this :)

That is extremely creepy...

I love it.

...Kinda confusing at the end...

Mind. Blown. This fic is FTW!

O.o Holy fudge...this is disturbing, and yet I like it. I think you wrote the characters very well. You captured not only B's madness, but A and L's as well. Good job.

Your a really good author, I love your stories!

Ooh...very very creepy! I like it! ;D

That's very disturbing. I like the writing style for the fic, and it was so different from anything I've read before. I really enjoyed it :). The poem in the beginning was really great too.

I love you. So much. I feel like you wrote this just for me. This is exactly how I see B and A. I can't express how amazing this is. Truely. Mmm complete poison. I love the dreamlike quality. In your words,

"ydjdfudhuidydhcxufic, Lucille."

Argh I love you