| Reviews for Adrian's True Jailbait |
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LifeIsASacrificeWorthMaking chapter 44 . 3/28/2016 Update! |
Reckless-R chapter 10 . 2/3/2014 love, love, love :) |
jusa lilcrazE chapter 2 . 1/23/2014 I love it so far but she seems a little too comfortable sleeping in the same bed. Even though she can read his mind, wouldn't she be a little freaked out considering that in the books, very few people knew of the other element spirit, let alone that one can be bonded to them? I mean she met him outside a bar, barely able to stand and smoking a cigarette. Don't get me wrong, its great so far:) Just giving a lil advice lol (Sometimes my advice sucks but I decided eh, why not? lol) KEEP WRITING! |
Dderby95 chapter 44 . 12/30/2013 No worries about the later update. It happens to the best of us. I'm glad the whole thing with Logan is done. It was starting to become a little longer than i had anticipated, so I like that you finished out the plot arc. Still loving Adrian and Remi, even though I'm reading the Bloodlines series. This one has more action and adventure, which I like. Hope your sequel goes well! |
mori chapter 44 . 12/17/2013 Loved the chapter though Adrian was kind of dumb by doing that. hope you don't leave us ganghung again haha |
VA-Lover chapter 44 . 12/10/2013 Thank you sooooooo much for updating! Please finish the story! I loved this chapter a lot! Please put Adrian and Remi together soon! Update soon! |
sweetnessnme chapter 44 . 12/11/2013 Think It about time she forgives Adrian...love the story. U got me on the edge of my seat. But i love me some Adrian. |
KatieB373 chapter 44 . 12/10/2013 Oh my beautiful friend if has definitely been too long. I do look forward to see what you have on store for each and every character! The dream?! Absolute perfection! Csnt wait for your next update! |
VA-Lover chapter 43 . 9/30/2013 Please update soon and finish this story! It is such as great story! Please finish it! Update really soon! |
Guest chapter 43 . 9/16/2013 Ohhh I really like this story please update soon! |
VA-Lover chapter 43 . 7/8/2013 Update soon! Please! Update! |
KatieB373 chapter 43 . 6/6/2013 So I finally got all caught up and you need to update freaking soon! Ready to read some more please! It's going we'll and I can't wait to see what you have in store! |
DDerby95 chapter 43 . 5/30/2013 Don't worry about updating late. We all have end of the year rushes as well. It might just be me because I haven't read in such a long while, but I'm having a hard time keeping names and feelings straight. But I bet if I reread a couple chapters that things would return. Kind of on a similar note, I feel like the incorporation of other characters, while enriching as it is, makes the story sort of pull away from the main story line. (Which I interpret as Adrian and Remi) I get kind of lost in the issue with Logan and Remi's sister as well as all the other activities going on with everyone else. I feel like you could separate the time before and after as two distinct Fan Fiction stories, like a sequel. First when she is with Adrian, and the second after they break up for good. That way we know this is about Remi's growth as a person and not completely her relationship with Adrian. Personally, because I really liked Remi and Adrian together, its hard to have Uri and Xander there without Adrian to kind of 'claim' Remi as his. I REALLY REALLY want them to get back together I understand her need for space. Her issue with Logan seems to be drawn out a lot. I don't know if you have a plot already scheduled and you follow that one or if you go chapter by chapter, but I want some sort of closure or incident which moves the plot forward in a larger way. (IE: Remi takes things into her own hands and goes to fix Logan by herself, and thus ultimately getting kidnapped and having Adrian save her. But I don't think that's plausible) Do you know what I mean? Sorry for the novel. I do enjoy reading your story each time to come out. You have very deep and thought through characters that bring new aspects to your work. And the complexity in which everything winds together is almost mind blowing. I just wonder if it may be a tad to much. Anyway, keep writing when you have a chance :) |
kc1447 chapter 42 . 4/7/2013 hey this is a great FF sooo uhmmm keep on updating |
amybelikov1 chapter 42 . 4/4/2013 Adrian is an ass and I'm glad that remi found mariah |