ryan: maybe if i block out my thoughts-
satori: nope.
ryan: ... *inhale* it is time for the final option.
satori: it wont wo-
ryan: _*bombarding satori's third eye with the mental screech of a enraged banshee, a bored Revotrisity jevil, and a startled whismur.*_

that went from typical fanfic oc self insert to disney music miracle scene in a flash

So nothing more than oh I actually stabbed you and that’s it no recompense or anything or even a sorry

I doubt you even are even using this account anymore Sasquatch, but if you are do you ever plan on finishing this fic?

It's unfortunate this fic had to die out, it was really starting to shape up nicely... But oh well, it was a good run while it lasted!

The guy must've been hunted down for being too magnificent. Godspeed you Magnificent Sasquatch!

What is that chapter title even supposed to mean, by the way?

Too bad this fic is dead it was shaping up nicely.

Fantastic story! I love it!

Great story, characters, and 10/10 humor!
Kind of a shame that the author left this unfinished, though.

This chapter really hooks you into the rest of the story. Even though this is just the beginning, this is one of the better self-inserts out there. I especially like the narrative...language...thing that I don't know how to describe. There are some questions I have, though. What happened to all the other "gappies"? What are Yukari's motives? Was the "Christ on a motorbike" references intentional? Looks like we shall find out in the next chapter!

God this is so fucking cringe-worthy.

Type your review for this chapter here...

very good.

Loving this stories! Keep up the good work bro! I support this story through the end! :)