Hades and Demeter are fighting over Persephone for thier own personal reasons that they don’t care about how she feels

I love the story...I feel bad for Persephone I think Demeter was kinda harsh on her because even if she did refuse to kiss hades he would of forced her to eat seeds either way...even though hades was a jerk in the beginning he was still a good husband to her

Thanks for the story

Wow, this story was amazing .

great story!

In love with this rendition! The chapters make their legacy so realistic and entertaining. Please continue to write more stories!

Great job! I enjoyed this story.

Absolutely loved it!

incredible i loved it a little more description for the lemons though but overall it was great

nice

I wish the sex were more descriptive...I thought you missed the part of taking her virginity.

this chapter was interesting...I hope you touch on how hard it will be to accept the circumstances and her feeling that she will never see her mother again...when I found out my parents had dropped me off to a boarding school and they were leaving without me, I cried for days and for weeks it was hard to accept the fact that I was going to be there for a while. I kept saying in my mind that "they are just teaching me a lesson, they are coming back to get me...they wouldn't do this."...so I hope to see this realistic way of thinking in the next chapters.

im not sure why you changed the name from hades to damian

wow...this is really well written and the ending sentence is very well formed leaving you "hanging" or yearning for more. I hope there will be more dialogue to truly show how unbearable her mother really is to feel trapped like this.

So wonderful. A poetic and driven flick. Loved the time evolution into modern day. Glorious.