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Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014 Cliffhangers... make me want to do a swan dive from a moving truck into a rolling ocean of lava and pills... This means that this story is beautiful but I can't find the next part. |
BBsevolEAR chapter 1 . 11/7/2011 THIS ISN'T OVER IS IT! YOU ARE GOING TO CONTINUE THIS RIGHT! IF IT'S OVER I'MMA BE SERIOUSLY MAD! :( PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO PHINEAS! I HOPE PHINEAS DOSEN'T DIE! :( |
alyss chapter 1 . 7/28/2011 wow. |
Comment person chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 Wow, a twist of events and personalities. Great job! I agree with Cmcrox11! From, Comment person P.S. I drop in with a silenced AUG, and...*cough* What? |
cmcrox11 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 SERIOUSLY! Sorry, I both love and hate cliffhangers at the same time. They give you time to think about what you want to happen, but they sure can be annoying when you're as in to the story as I was. Please update soon! -cmcrox11 |
Raddtastic chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 The suspence! oh i wonder whats going to happen next? I really like it. Its well wriiten! Continue soon! |
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 O.o what. just. happened? |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 Cool story update soon! |
The High Lord of Terra chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 Love it! This is a pretty good story so far. Although you might want to be careful with the songfic aspect. If you can, try not to use the lyrics of the song too much (as in take up half the chapter). You're doing pretty good with keeping that, but I'm just sayin'. The plot of this story is certainly intriguing, and I'm ready for more! -Terra Oh, and an early HAPPY NEW YEAR to ya! |