This is maddeningly brilliant. The concept of the Master being kept and Rose and Jack together is just too fantastic. Seriously. It's gonna be hard to cram my enjoyment of this, but I'll try. The plot was written wonderfully, and the flow of the story was great. I thought that you put Rose's character and her developments amazingly, and the way she flowed out of and into Jack's Torchwood life was great. Especially when Jack began to fall apart, that was brilliant brilliant brilliant. The ending was vomiting brilliance. I adored it. The detailing was great and the idea fits fantastically. Great job :)

I love it. The concept is amazing and intriguing and the execution is even better. All around wonderful. And the end is, of course, amazing. xD

Brilliant :)

Wow, that went in an unexpected direction! Still, fabulous idea and very well written. Thanks for posting!

Wow; I have never seen such an original plot or great writing in such a long time! Excellent work :)

I like the ending, though I think you could have made it a bit longer; there's a lot of build-up, yet the very last part seems too short, somehow. But that's just my two cents. Good read, very well-written, and I like that brief contrast between Gwen and Rose.

Really amazing. I really felt for all three of them, and the ending was so perfect.