| Reviews for Only Seven |
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Einzelfall chapter 1 . 7/23/2013 Awww *.* The end is really sweet :D |
CelestialSonata7 chapter 1 . 12/11/2011 Oh my gosh that was too sweet for words! Sooooo cute! |
pinkshade chapter 1 . 5/7/2011 Awwwwww! That was so cuuuttteee! Thank you so much for this fic, it was completely adorable! |
VoicesInTheWind chapter 1 . 5/1/2011 Aww! This is perfect! I love this so much; Carlos and Logan are adorable! Logan giving Carlos his red Power Ranger is so sweet, and it's great that he could restore Carlos' faith in Santa Claus - seven is too young to stop believing in magic. -Voices |
WriterMania chapter 1 . 3/12/2011 Another fantastic one-shot. You never cease to amaze me. I might think I know where you are taking a story, and then you completely surprise me. In a good way, of course. xD Like you said, this was a bit more angsty then what I had expected, and actually ended up shedding a tear as Logan told Carlos about his wish for his mother to come back. Since I'm getting over a cold, I already have a cough and the sniffles, so when I started to tear up, I began to cough, and, of course, my nose was full of snot. :/ Not a pretty picture, I know. Then, the icing on the cake? I wiped my tears on my sleeve, then remembered I was wearing mascara. :p It had smudged on my shirt. Oh well. :D Great story, and I can't wait to read your other ones! |
Fluent in Fangirl chapter 1 . 3/2/2011 Aww, that was so cute! I just love Logan and Carlos' friendship! ) |
MyHeroRaven chapter 1 . 2/15/2011 OMG that was so sweet, I'm not a HUGE fan of Logan But he was amazing in this, I feel for him losing his mom. I lost mine too. Really good job. Hero |
Juleskat101 chapter 1 . 2/2/2011 That was BEYOND adorable! :) And it made me cry while smiling, so that's a good sign! Haha Nice job! :D |
Fang lover23 chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 AWWWWW! We need more kids in the world like Logan. That was WAY TOO PRECIOUS. I cried when I realized Logan had given Carlos his Power Ranger. C: Oh my...Power Rangers. Those were the days... XD |
Jamocha101 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 Man, you're good. I don't understand how you do it, but you always get a kajillion reviews for your epic one-shots. I'll be lucky if I get, pssh, six. ._. And this was touching; I almost cried-Stories with deceased parents always bring out the worst in me. x_x And some people here are like...obsessed with you. Not saying names...EpicInTheLibray wut? XD And you and I have two different mindsets; I always pictured Carlos being the one with the dead Mom, because of that time his Dad visited him, and if his mom would alive, I think she would come, too, but ohmygosh, look I'm rambling. I'm just sharing my useless thoughts; it's YOUR fanfiction, so you can do whatever the frack you want with it. XD Plus, there's absolutely no evidence in the show on whether or not Logan's mom or dad or whoever is dead, so I can't say anything. THEY NEED TO PUT IN SOME FAMILY, MAN. I also love the way you're not biased between characters. You treat them all as equals. Unlike me, the alternate-character-abuser. Whaaa, I'm so viscious. :'c Five stars. Keep writing. ;-) |
fall into your sunlight chapter 1 . 12/30/2010 awhhh this was so cute! and i hate myself for being so late reading this :p but yeah it was great! and i love that Logan's daddy was so nice :D and i loved how adorable Carlos was :D all in all, i loved this! :D |
Fish Stick Friday chapter 1 . 12/29/2010 Yay! My Christmas present is Cargan bromance! I love you! I'm so sorry I'm just now reviewing. I've already read this, but I wanted to review on my laptop. Carlos was so cute and adorable in the beginning when he was waiting in line to see Santa. I love how you are writing them as little boys. I loved when you did that in Miracle of the Moment (the first chapter I think where they met on the frozen pond). "I guess I have to, huh? Logie says that being impatient doesn't make things go faster." Where do I even begin with that? I love how little seven year-old Carlos calls Logan "Logie." I love how Carlos listens to Logan and tries to heed what he says. Plus, that line was just so cute. I can imagine little seven year-old Carlos saying that and how he would look when he said it. "Carlos disregarded his father's words of wisdom because he had no idea what a 'virtue' was." Lol. I like how even seven year-old Logan is wise beyond his years. When Carlos said that he wanted to be a policeman just like his dad, that was all kinds of adorable! Do you know what I realized? Carlos and Logan are the only two whose dream jobs involve helping people; Carlos wants to be a policeman (or in the show's case, a superhero, lol), and Logan wants to be a doctor. Of course I think both Carlos and Logan are the most compassionate. I don't know why, but the part where Carlos said, "And we'll be friends forever." kind of reminded me of The Lion King where little Simba and Mufasa had just finished wrestling with each other in the night, and Simba was all, "We're pals, right?" Mufasa was all, "Right." Then Simba was all, "And we'll always be pals, right?" Granted, there were some differences: in The Lion King, the conversation was about Simba and Mufasa, and in this story, the father and son were talking about the son and his best friends. Still though, it reminded me so much of The Lion King. I loved how excited Carlos was to see Santa, and I loved how he found the elves to be scary. I smiled when Carlos referred to himself as "Carlos Garcia Jr." and referred to his dad as "Carlos Garcia Sr." I don't know why. I guess it's because he even included the "Jr." and "Sr." part. I liked how Carlos went on to tell Santa all the things that might have made him "naughty" in Santa's eyes, or rather Carlos' eyes. I love how Carlos gave his father the other candy cane. "Carlos, you didn't peak in your mommy's closet again did you?" Lol. OMG! Carlos and Logan arguing about the existence of Santa was so adorable! I think I choked on the fluff! Then when Logan told Carlos why he didn't believe in Santa, my heart broke. Here I thought it was the same reason why Logan didn't believe in ghosts. Something like science disproves any notion of ghosts or Santa. Although Logan mentioning how it was impossible for Santa to fly all around the world in one night sounded like something Logan would say. I liked how logical Carlos was being despite how upset he was about Santa not being real. OMG! Poor Carlos! :( Maybe it's because of how Ryan Mitchell is in your other stories, but when Logan told his dad why Carlos was so upset, I was uneasy especially when you mentioned the part about him not being ready to lay out a punishment. OMG! Even Ryan used to call Logan "Logie"? "The tearful words broke Mr. Mitchell's heart" Whoa! Mr. Mitchell has a heart? Oh wait. This is before he started burying himself in his work and neglecting his son. I liked how Logan came up with a solution. Who says Kendall always comes up with the answers? Aww! That's so sweet of Logan to give Carlos his red power ranger. Did Logan write Carlos' name on the present? Because wouldn't Carlos recognize Logan's handwriting? Unless, Logan's dad wrote Carlos' name. I also hope Carlos didn't see the wrapping paper used at Logan's house or else he'd be able to identify it. I take it from the colors of the power rangers toys, that they were Mighty Morphin Power Rangers action figures? A little known secret about me is that I'm pretty knowledgeable in the Power Rangers universe, because I have watched a lot of the seasons. Even as a teenager and young adult *cough, cough* Anyways, I can't tell you how awesome you are for including the whole Power Rangers plot. I used to play Power Rangers with my friends too when I was little. Ironically, I always wanted to be the black ranger, just like Logan ended up being. Sheesh! Are there any other ways I can identify with Logan? Angst, fluff, and Cargan bromance. My three favorite things. Just like angst, Guilty James, and Jagan bromance are your favorite three things. Fishy? I love it! Now I need to give you a nickname... Wow! I feel stupid. I should've known this was inspired by Big Time Blogger. I saw the title and was like "WTF?" I'm slow, I know... Yeah, who knew Ryan Mitchell could BE nice? He's your favorite part of your BTR world? To quote James, Carlos, and Logan, "BLASPHEMY!" Anyways, I LOVED this SO MUCH! It's better than a lot of the Christmas presents I got. Seriously, the best gift I got was a Best Buy gift card and two iTunes gift cards. I love you for writing this for me, and I love you in general. Sorry again for taking two days to review. I have Thursday, Friday, and Saturday off. I have three chapter sof "HOC" and three or four of your other Christmas present stories to review. I'll get to them on my days off, okay? I promise. I also have to update "TIFAY" and "My Best Friend Is a Vampire." Anyways, I hope you had a great Christmas, and I'll talk to you later. Love you. |
beatrice chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 awwww! |
EpicInTheLibrary chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 Sorry for... taking so long to review this. I'm flying under the radar or something. Whatever it was adorable and why can't Logan's dad be like that all the time? Why does his life have to suck so much? I swear. Parallel. Universe. Never gonna happen lolohsob. My fingers are hurting. Huhhhrrrr. Well Carlos was my favorite in here and Logan was the best too and they both cried I guess wait they did I'm just saying. Logan was so sweet, too. I bet Carlos realized a while later (a few years later) that he did that. Or maybe it was like Toy Story and the power ranger had Logan's name on the foot. Lol I can see Carlos going "D:" and then Santa isn't real and wow it wass lucky for Logan that Carlos didn't ask anyone else for that or else he'd be screwed. I wish Ryan weren't so horrible. Seriously. What's his problem? I want him to die forever. Like he already did but that was a stupid death he should have died slowly and painfully. And then some other thing that I don't want to think up could happen so Logan could be the ultimate winner and the end. I think I'm done being retarded good day to you sir. |
al h digal chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 ah-mazing. i love christmas related stuff. omg. this was amazing |