WOW really good, heartbreaking to read but good nonetheless !

I can't even think in a second part because it won't work. It's just amazing how you describe Arthur's and Ariadne's feelings.

Arthur is so confused, He loves Yvonne just because he was already got used to her presence. He loves her because "it's easy with her". I'm imagining an afternoon at her place where he reads and she rest her head in his shoulder and nothing more.

But I'm guessing that he's in love with Ariadne because everything it's different with her and his curious nature makes him wonder how the things could be between them. I could see them fighting, taunting each other, pushing their buttons but their love(?) it's bigger than that. She makes him to do thing that he won't do for someone else and that's just fascinating for him.

With Ariadne's feeling you made just a wonderful job. I feel her real, desperate for Arthur, mad at him but loving him at the same time. In some point I could almost feel sorry for her situation.

I don't know if you have plans to continue it, but if don't, it's perfect just like this. Maybe for me, the future for them it's just an physical relationship, no feelings involved.

You're an excellent writer :)

So much love for this too. 3

if this is the end...then i'm mad.

Wow. You're an extremely good writer. I love the way you potray arthur and ariadne. Exspecially ariadne. Most people write her as this shy, sweet girl, but you make her a bit more confident and more adult like. All in all, I pretty much love every inception piece you've written lol keep it up :)

I'll be honest - I'm the type of reader who will gobble up stories without ever leaving a trace of being there. I'm the girl who raises your read count without leaving sign of appreciation.

Not this story. It's short, leaving much to the imagination. Nothing wrong with that, because it creates a world within the world of Inception, beyond the world that the movie created...that is fucking fantastic. This story is amazing, no doubt about it.

You are an amazing writer. Part of me wishes you would continue this story, but I think that would just hurt the simple eloquence of this one-shot.

So I am simply left with saying you are an amazing writer and I hope you continue writing.

Interesting... This fic was amazing. It was so unique, and I loved the sort of thread of a plot. Continue if you can, because your an astounding writer.

Really good! interesting, grabbed my attention, everything! Keep on writing.

Oh hello. Fancy seeing you here as well ;P.

I've said this at LiveJournal and I'll say it again here. You write angst so beautifully and I love the dialogue between them. I like how you always make their relationship very complicated and hard on both of them. I guess, in my mind, they've always had it kind of hard and you manage to portray that in their actions and dialogue so perfectly. Hon, you are amazing at this. Bravo D

Glad there's gonna be a sequel..?

Thanks!

I also believe using the f-bomb so frequently was unneeded BUT it does not distract from this one shots potential...and meant to author alert not story alert... anyway, what can they do? It's hard to love someone and to be in love with another...brilliant

Really loved the fic. The emotions and interaction seem very real. Please continue!

I liked this. But I sort of felt that the cluster f-bomb took away the power that it was trying to have. And I also kind of found Ariadne out of character. She wasn't exactly believable, y'know?

But the concept of this just makes the world a better place:)

I just want to say I love your story.

I just watched Inception yesterday. And I loved. Especially Arthur & Ariadne. And I love the way you make them. Their felling, their attitude. It was really great. And the explanation of Arthur in the end, about Yvonne was so... I don't find the words, it was really great. Maybe I would prefer if Eames and Ariadne makes Arthur more jealous, it would be fun. But whatever :)

And I want to say you are the first english author that I've read. I'm french, and generally, I don't read english fanfic' because I don't understand all and I don't read in one time. But in the French fandom, there's not a lot of arthur/ariadne stories so... And I succeed to read xD Ok, in more than 10 minutes maybe but I read it :D So thank you for the reading, and I hope read you more often ;)

Sorry for the english :/

That was a real pleasure to read, really (especially becasue I could so simply imagine Ariadne's feelings as I lived through somethng like that, minus the scene in warehouse, as he never had tried to explain his action). Anyway, enough about me. I like the way you describe this story, everything seemed so real and true. And I understand Ariadne, no woman could push Arthur away, not really. I like the ending, it's so open, allowing your thoughts and imaginations go in every direction.

Short. Cute. Blissful. ;)

I loved it! I hate Yvonne. LOL I'm swooning just imagining Arthur holding me underneath him on a desk. Unf.

Looooooved the ending. Yvonne isn't perfect but this story is.