WOOOOOOWWWWWW! JUST WOW! AWESOME BEST FANFIC EVER!

Sephiroth and Cissnei interactions are great ;)

i love your story and the pairings here

Yes, although the formal term for that is 'greenhorn'. I am loving this so far. Yuffentine is the best; there's potential in them. I don't worry too much about the age difference, though, because I've known a lot of long-time couples who have at least a twenty-year-gap. Hell, even I am in love with a man eighteen years older than I am. It all depends on the chemistry and how they interact with each other until the end of their lives. P.S.: The reviewer "heredia" here is clearly uneducated and immature, so you can ignore his/her nonsensical rambling/flame.

This chapter is awesome if you listen to the song elastic heart by sia

"What if Genesis had caused the Nibelheim Incident instead of Sephiroth? What could have changed? Zerith, Cloti, Sephissnei, hints of Yuffentine and Tselena later in the story." - nothing, they both are filth in the eyes of everyone, and also there is no way in hell Sephiroth would go after that hypocritical bitch cissnei - why should he go after one of bitches who are loyal to the man who took away everything from him, not to mention that he is nothing but a filth for her, just a test subject, lab rabbit, animal for being tested on - everyone feels only repulsion to him

First class soldiers are dwarf star busters, and sephiroth is leagues above that.

The best scene, lol!

I wonder why Seph didn't destroy Jenova in the lab when he had the chance...

I'll get the coffin ready for Yuffie...Poor girl just has no common sense. On that note...LOL! Pink-haired Sephy...ye gods, I've never laughed so hard.

Hey, Yuffie, DUH!

May I inquire, has Auriel ever been laid? He's so uptight.

NEERRRRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. It's well thought out, interesting and I have to say I LOVE good Seph. :) Miss Good (or even Neutral) Genesis, but hey, I missed him in Crisis Core.

You tend to describe things with the same word and that was something I found rather distracting. IE: Her fingers sharpened into sharp points. Okay, never exactly those words, but I remember noting several instances where that happened.

Other than that, I have little to no complaint and only praise. :)

I love Sephiroth's last line. "Then so be it." Best line ever.