This seemed a lot like slash (because of Remus holding Sirius as he slept, that just kind of seems like a thing that lovers, not friends, would do). I still liked it, as I'm sure you know I'm a huge Wolfstar fan. I did, at first, take 'naked' the wrong way, but I realized what it really meant when you mentioned the wine bottle. I really like the idea of a fic about Sirius talking about Azkaban, it doesn't seem like a widely done idea and it makes me want to take a crack at it. Very good oneshot.

- Hatter of Madness

Really nice. I didn't want to say cute, because it's not. And I mean that in a perfectly good way. I think you did a good job a capturing emotions, especially Sirius. Desperate, lonely, and even a bit mad. Terrific job:)

This was so beautiful it almost made me cry!

Though I think the summary could be better, because this summary seems like Remus is going to see Sirius naked for real lol.

But I loved it!

Aw, that was adorable.

Hey iheartcoco!

First of all, I was thinking of writing a one shot with Sirius/Remus and was pretty amused to find how much resemblance your story has to the story I had in mind. Only yours is really well written and increases my lack of confidence in writing something similar, haha. (: I think you did a great job and got under the skin of the two, as far as it's possible when it's slashy. Their exchange of words was realistic, meaningful and even with a bit of humour and sarcasm added, loved it.

Now, I assume you'd like some critique too, otherwise close your eyes and jump to the bottom! ;) I honestly think you could've come up with a better title. I love your description in the middle: "... and when Remus looked at his friend again he didn't see the skeleton with the haunted eyes he had seen moments before, he saw a broken man with the innocent eyes of a frightened child, ..." - it works really really well. The following "he was seeing Sirius naked” isn’t that corny, but I thought it seemed a little too obvious to make “naked” the title, too. Maybe “Sirius Naked” could do it instead, making it more particular less cliché. Do you follow? (:

(However, I’m pretty sure your title is able to attract a lot more readers, so it’s not all bad. P)

Second thing, there were a few places where you missed an apostrophe (it’s and what’s).

And that’s it. Obviously, those things are such teeny-tiny details it shows how great your work is. ;) I really enjoyed reading and will be back for more.

That was wonderful! I loved the imagery, especially the description of Sirius' eyes. Brilliant, perfectly conveyed their insecurities. xx

I liked it. Liked it alot. It was really sweet, and you wrote it delicately. Great job.